for Watashitachi No Ai4/8/2007 c1 
6Koukasen
Wow. I loved it. I now want to cry and be dramatic. Good job, Maris. S; I am not a crier. What does the Japanese mean? Like the title? I know that'ai' means love, but that's about it. ;)
6KoukasenWow. I loved it. I now want to cry and be dramatic. Good job, Maris. S; I am not a crier. What does the Japanese mean? Like the title? I know that'ai' means love, but that's about it. ;)
5/16/2005 c1 Peter Pan Died
I...don't know what to say. There's really nothing for me to criticize at all here. And like most of your things, it's going on my favorites. Beautiful.
I...don't know what to say. There's really nothing for me to criticize at all here. And like most of your things, it's going on my favorites. Beautiful.
5/3/2005 c1 6spacebunny
Crazy lovers these kids.
our love, deshou?
This one is longer then your other ones and just as deep. Yes, the format could be worked a little different but the words are still very strong. Might I reccomend not centering it. I think your breaks are fine, maybe redefine your stanza's though.
Whatever you do, ii deshou ne.
6spacebunnyCrazy lovers these kids.
our love, deshou?
This one is longer then your other ones and just as deep. Yes, the format could be worked a little different but the words are still very strong. Might I reccomend not centering it. I think your breaks are fine, maybe redefine your stanza's though.
Whatever you do, ii deshou ne.