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7/13/2005 c1 lilbaypony
Nicely written, very nicely written
5/2/2005 c1 21tawnyfawn
Hi, tawnyfawn/melissa from horsewyse here! Anyway...

I liked how the at the beginning of the poem, you started with what they were saying, and at the end with what you were saying. It was as if it'd gone in a full circle, and it gave the poem a complete feel, if you know what I mean.

I totally agree with this point though, some people act as if it'd just be easy to do things like that.

from fawny
5/1/2005 c1 26asphyxiated
Umm...me?Im Australian. I speak english fluently.lol..
4/30/2005 c1 hi
i agree with you. but its so sad when your friends cant stop cutting and such. and then you feel helpless, watching them hurt themselves.
4/30/2005 c1 26BestSkeptic
Is English your second language?

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