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3/7/2006 c1 Needa S
Beautiful, Excellent job.
3/4/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
wow~ beautiful~ very flowing~

keep writing!
11/11/2005 c1 1SandwichPress
You're pro, you know that. I feel like I'm reading Robert Frost or someone.
8/31/2005 c1 catseyeview
I can see why this was placed. I especially loved reading about the playground...
5/23/2005 c1 36obsidian katana
great piece. nicely written, i like this. good use of capitalization and rhyme in the last stanza. nice work. keep writing!
5/6/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Perfect ending. Wonderful job on this, describing the different faces of the river.
5/3/2005 c1 219Matthew James Current
Lovely work. Above all this piece strikes me as elegant and full of deeper meaning. I liked the symbolism of the river being representative of poetry and how you built the poem's other symbolism around that. This was very eloquent and I very much look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you very much for your reviews and your time. It means a lot to me.

I am glad you enjoyed my work and I am pleased to say that I enjoy yours. I look forward to reading more of your pieces in the future.
5/2/2005 c1 109mistressKC
very nice poem - the imagery is very vivid. No wonder you won third place!

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