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for My undeficient love

11/11/2005 c1 Julius Gillian
Good, tasty. Though I don't understand why you'd look for the negative/less dominant features of the person you love. So I dunno, if the guy/girl seems flawless do you look for their imperfections?

Anyway this was written pretty well. I think you were honest in this poem, and that's what I like. Love is a precious thing and it's sometimes hard to express. So being such a difficult subject to conquer I think you did good :)

- ShadowEver

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