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9/24/2005 c1 Shima And Tempis
Eerily disturbing and yet I enjoyed reading. Favorite lines being:

"Slowly from the distance,The sun begins to rise.It shines upon the pools of blood.What will be tomorrow's prize?"

And...

"Midnight shadows dancing aroundFlickering golden flames.A single whisper said aloud:'Here begins the games.'"

Hehe, the beginning and end. Really, really well done.-SAT
5/16/2005 c1 celentia-changingacconts
kinda creepy, but i like it! good discription.
5/11/2005 c1 41Pelirizado
Whoah! Great job getting the story across! The few details allow the reader's imagination to work. It is a little dark, but very intriguing. Good job.
5/5/2005 c1 41Stifled Scar
that was really good. you had great use of imagery
5/1/2005 c1 5BabyBeeLovesHoneyBear
morbid, creepy, somewhat gross and disturbing...i love it!
5/1/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
i like it even if the rhythm is a tad off, i mean u read my poem it was completey off the rhythm. wtv works for you and makes it ur own is awesome. no law says there has to have rhythm or rhyme. i like this piece, very descriptive and well done

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