for Deoman II: Times Change8/1/2008 c11 
1Grey Jester
It might be three years since your last chapter, but I just recently found these stories and read through Deoman and Deoman II. They reminded me of the Diskworld series. So, naturally, I thought they were magnificent.
If you ever feel up to it again, I would love to reach the end of this story.
Just think about it.
And thanks for the good read.
1Grey JesterIt might be three years since your last chapter, but I just recently found these stories and read through Deoman and Deoman II. They reminded me of the Diskworld series. So, naturally, I thought they were magnificent.
If you ever feel up to it again, I would love to reach the end of this story.
Just think about it.
And thanks for the good read.
11/8/2005 c11 22Artemis Darkclaw
that was a good chapter as always. nice length too. I really like Pyre. hmm...what's Reed up to now? well sorry it took me so long to review.
-Artemis
22Artemis Darkclawthat was a good chapter as always. nice length too. I really like Pyre. hmm...what's Reed up to now? well sorry it took me so long to review.
-Artemis
10/25/2005 c11 26PNEK MEKS
o...what's reed up to? Dum dum dum! Can't wait to read your next chapter! Keep writing!
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26PNEK MEKSo...what's reed up to? Dum dum dum! Can't wait to read your next chapter! Keep writing!
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10/19/2005 c3 Xavier Everett
Another good chapter. I will come back and review another - the trouble is, every time I say I'll do so soon, I forget for several months before I actually get around to it. So, to avoid disappointment, a review will be with you at some indeterminate point during the next several months. Could be later tonight - could be next week - could be next year. I don't know. Excellent story, though.
Xavier
Another good chapter. I will come back and review another - the trouble is, every time I say I'll do so soon, I forget for several months before I actually get around to it. So, to avoid disappointment, a review will be with you at some indeterminate point during the next several months. Could be later tonight - could be next week - could be next year. I don't know. Excellent story, though.
Xavier
9/18/2005 c10 PrincessEilonwy
Ah ha ha, Inca could turn into a cliched quest-type heroine if she isn't careful. "Young, inquisitive Inca sets out from the home she has known all her life in search of the truth hidden from her since her birth-the identity of her father." And so on, blah blah blah. Of course, maybe it wasn't the best decision on Ash's part to hide everything from her. . .oh well. She'll find out now one way or the other. Good chapter, update soon!
Ah ha ha, Inca could turn into a cliched quest-type heroine if she isn't careful. "Young, inquisitive Inca sets out from the home she has known all her life in search of the truth hidden from her since her birth-the identity of her father." And so on, blah blah blah. Of course, maybe it wasn't the best decision on Ash's part to hide everything from her. . .oh well. She'll find out now one way or the other. Good chapter, update soon!
9/18/2005 c9 PrincessEilonwy
Bart's anti-hero speech is great. It's all so true. . .heck, one of my characters has an ancient letter opener. I love the Chess and Coachspotting Society!
Bart's anti-hero speech is great. It's all so true. . .heck, one of my characters has an ancient letter opener. I love the Chess and Coachspotting Society!
9/18/2005 c8 PrincessEilonwy
Interesting dream. . .poor Atticus, he'll never get Bart to concentrate on his books, will he? And now he has to be social and deal with people, on top of everything. . .Hayley Hobbes cracks me up.
Interesting dream. . .poor Atticus, he'll never get Bart to concentrate on his books, will he? And now he has to be social and deal with people, on top of everything. . .Hayley Hobbes cracks me up.
9/18/2005 c7 PrincessEilonwy
Ah, hey, wow, I've really gotten beind on reviewing. Sorry about that. I love Atticus Lemmings, really I do. . .
Ah, hey, wow, I've really gotten beind on reviewing. Sorry about that. I love Atticus Lemmings, really I do. . .
9/16/2005 c10 22Artemis Darkclaw
hey that was a good chapter. i like how you keep Inca in the dark about julian. I'm so happy to be hearing from them all again and finally know what's been happening to them. anyway great chapter. update again soon.
-Artemis
22Artemis Darkclawhey that was a good chapter. i like how you keep Inca in the dark about julian. I'm so happy to be hearing from them all again and finally know what's been happening to them. anyway great chapter. update again soon.
-Artemis
9/16/2005 c10 26PNEK MEKS
Another shorty, but another great chapter! I can't wait till the next one! Keep it up!
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P.S. Inca's gonna get herself in trouble isn't she?
26PNEK MEKSAnother shorty, but another great chapter! I can't wait till the next one! Keep it up!
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P.S. Inca's gonna get herself in trouble isn't she?
9/9/2005 c9 22Artemis Darkclaw
that was a great chapter. I especailly liked the way you brought in Aaron's father just as he was thinking about him. i like Atticus too. he's not Julian but he's still cool. so can't wait for the next update.
-Artemis
22Artemis Darkclawthat was a great chapter. I especailly liked the way you brought in Aaron's father just as he was thinking about him. i like Atticus too. he's not Julian but he's still cool. so can't wait for the next update.
-Artemis
9/8/2005 c9 26PNEK MEKS
Woot! Butterfly boy is an ass and it's okay to hate someone and not have a reason. Nine times out of 10 it's instinct, and instinct is always right! * smiles * Good chappy! I'd prefer a little more length, but this is from the girl who hasn't updated since feburary...
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26PNEK MEKSWoot! Butterfly boy is an ass and it's okay to hate someone and not have a reason. Nine times out of 10 it's instinct, and instinct is always right! * smiles * Good chappy! I'd prefer a little more length, but this is from the girl who hasn't updated since feburary...
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8/29/2005 c8 PNEK MEKS
wait...he punched out Felix? That kid who they drug out of the past in the last story to save the world? What? Your gonna have to explain that a little better.
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wait...he punched out Felix? That kid who they drug out of the past in the last story to save the world? What? Your gonna have to explain that a little better.
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8/29/2005 c8 22Artemis Darkclaw
haha...that Felix memory was funny! so we're getting a new character are we? that's cool. when are Perry and Ash and Inca gonna come back into the picture? (not criticizing you on that point, i just miss them) anyway, great chapter, I shall await your next update w/ great curiousity and anticipation.
-ArtemisP.S. as a last request i would like to read about Perry and Inca again before I die...
22Artemis Darkclawhaha...that Felix memory was funny! so we're getting a new character are we? that's cool. when are Perry and Ash and Inca gonna come back into the picture? (not criticizing you on that point, i just miss them) anyway, great chapter, I shall await your next update w/ great curiousity and anticipation.
-ArtemisP.S. as a last request i would like to read about Perry and Inca again before I die...
8/17/2005 c7 26PNEK MEKS
Okay! * kicks you swiftly * There we go! Now make sure you write some more from now on! * smiles * Awesome chapter...and you have every right to make fun of people in glasses if you wear them. I wear them too...* sighs * Anywho! Awesome chappy and I love how barty reacted. Keep it up!
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26PNEK MEKSOkay! * kicks you swiftly * There we go! Now make sure you write some more from now on! * smiles * Awesome chapter...and you have every right to make fun of people in glasses if you wear them. I wear them too...* sighs * Anywho! Awesome chappy and I love how barty reacted. Keep it up!
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