for Patchwork3/8/2006 c1 
10Nova-Janna
I liked this a lot, more than the others of yours I've read now. (I've been reading up the list.) I liked the photograph metaphor a lot, especially with the line about airbrushing out imperfections. I don't know why, exactly, but this just flowed better and made me think, and I like it because of that. You made some very good points and portrayed emotion well.
10Nova-JannaI liked this a lot, more than the others of yours I've read now. (I've been reading up the list.) I liked the photograph metaphor a lot, especially with the line about airbrushing out imperfections. I don't know why, exactly, but this just flowed better and made me think, and I like it because of that. You made some very good points and portrayed emotion well.
5/2/2005 c1 44catching-falling-stars
gosh! this has to be the 3rd one i've read of yours. you are really good! i'm so jealous. i like the descripitive language in this. never stop writing! @_@
44catching-falling-starsgosh! this has to be the 3rd one i've read of yours. you are really good! i'm so jealous. i like the descripitive language in this. never stop writing! @_@
5/2/2005 c1 95beti213
patchwork can easily be more beautiful than a "whole" fabric... I like the extended metaphor here, and especially the first two lines are poignant. You could probably have a stronger rhythmic sense here, but it really is optional-something to think about. I like it-keep writing!
95beti213patchwork can easily be more beautiful than a "whole" fabric... I like the extended metaphor here, and especially the first two lines are poignant. You could probably have a stronger rhythmic sense here, but it really is optional-something to think about. I like it-keep writing!