1/3/2006 c1 8Goddess Cytherea
In response to your ques. of, "...what does this have to do with truth?" And all... The essay was not only about love and your apparent lack of it. Its a general topic on how always people you love end up questioning you and not trusting you and all that. Since u get the point. Its not only about your boyfriends or whatever. Like, when was the last time you remember your parents start questioning about u and all. Or, intead you're the one whose questioning your parents things. (If u are someone who grew up in family sitiuations, its no offense, seriously).

Finally, how the hell do you expect someone, or even yourself to write without thinking back to your personal life? Where do you think edgar allen poe got all of his ideas. Or, even shakesphere. Or, Meg Cabot, Lurlene McDainel and so on...

8/30/2005 c1 5Amakusa Ryu
It's a nice and interesting story. Anyway, thanks for your review earlier. Well, I actually made some changes but I don't actually know how to change it directly in this site. Whenever I needed something to edit, my story always ends up deleted. Say, can you help me on this problem? I really appreciate your review. It helped me a lot on my assignment on mmaking that topic a debate. Thanks again. Your previous review got deleted but dont worry, it's still on my email and I'm planning to post it back again when I have time. See you.

5/4/2005 c1 Wynter
WoW! This was really good! (like always) I really liked the whole 1st person view threw a thug's eyes... hmm Gramaticly I didnt see anything wrong from reading it once over (not that im good at it myself to begin with). I found the 1st paragrapgh confuseing maybe cuz i didnt realize it was 1st person right away (or cuz im tired ^^; ) Either way great story! Nice ending.