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5/22/2005 c1 8Room Without A Door
Nice, I comepletely get what your trying to say. Nicely done.
5/4/2005 c1 89Armas Apple
Hokay, well, see a line cn be in any shape. It isn't always straight. So it can look like trousers.
5/4/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
huh? ::is confused::
5/4/2005 c1 30Drizit
Huh? Not ALL poems are dark in fp! Most are about love! And hope and what not. Anyway, back to the subject...

Ahem... I don't quite get it. Trousers? Since when did line look like trousers? huh. Yo have got to explain this one oh wise one.
5/3/2005 c1 2ButterNJam
I love the light-heartedness about your poem. A cute happy one like these are very rare, most of the poems of fiction press are very dark and deep and disturbing, which isin't necesarily a BAD thing, it's just that alot of that get hard to stomach sometimes.
5/3/2005 c1 26Michael Kim
Thought provoking
5/3/2005 c1 7swtdreamz101
hmm are you talking about the kinda lines u draw? interesting, nice poem

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