
7/31/2007 c1
6MelGrl
GREAT beginning. Luved the way you ended the first chapter. Can't wait for the rest since the story sounds very amusing. Please update soon, 'cause I want to read more.

GREAT beginning. Luved the way you ended the first chapter. Can't wait for the rest since the story sounds very amusing. Please update soon, 'cause I want to read more.
3/16/2006 c1
5Somedaymydreamswillcome
Oh. My. Geeze. I haven't NEVER had that happen to me ::knock on wood::...But I SURE hope it doesn't happen in a house full of guys! lol...I mean I hope there's at least ONE girl there...lol LOVE IT! But how are they all going to fit in the one car? How many people are going?Melodyxoxoxoxoxo

Oh. My. Geeze. I haven't NEVER had that happen to me ::knock on wood::...But I SURE hope it doesn't happen in a house full of guys! lol...I mean I hope there's at least ONE girl there...lol LOVE IT! But how are they all going to fit in the one car? How many people are going?Melodyxoxoxoxoxo
2/26/2006 c1 ur just you
haha, stain on her pajamas? i can laugh! im a girl! lol, anyways please please update! cause i love al of your stories! :) though i may have reviewed with the name Atreyu Love, its still me, its just me lazy to sign in! but i signed in! *clicks add author to favs list!* :) kk, so update k?
haha, stain on her pajamas? i can laugh! im a girl! lol, anyways please please update! cause i love al of your stories! :) though i may have reviewed with the name Atreyu Love, its still me, its just me lazy to sign in! but i signed in! *clicks add author to favs list!* :) kk, so update k?
5/19/2005 c1
22Mi.Ishi
Bwahahahahaha! Oh, poor girl. I really like this and am quite excited to see what happens with it.
Cheers,-solin

Bwahahahahaha! Oh, poor girl. I really like this and am quite excited to see what happens with it.
Cheers,-solin
5/6/2005 c1
4black robin
I just knew she was going to get a stain on her pants! I just knew it! I hate those days when period is no longer just another word at the end of the sentence. I'm serious. It's a pain in the ass. Well not the ass but..it's a pain. Update soon! I think this is the beginning of an awesome story.

I just knew she was going to get a stain on her pants! I just knew it! I hate those days when period is no longer just another word at the end of the sentence. I'm serious. It's a pain in the ass. Well not the ass but..it's a pain. Update soon! I think this is the beginning of an awesome story.
5/6/2005 c1
7chainedreamer
OH MY GOD!
That was just hilarious! you had me laughing out loud in my uni lab TWICE!
but please please do update soon!

OH MY GOD!
That was just hilarious! you had me laughing out loud in my uni lab TWICE!
but please please do update soon!
5/4/2005 c1
11arachibutyrophobia
oh, gosh... the embarassment...its awful...so evil, how can you DO that to your character? lol. well, its a cute plot, and ought to be hilarious with these characters. please continue!

oh, gosh... the embarassment...its awful...so evil, how can you DO that to your character? lol. well, its a cute plot, and ought to be hilarious with these characters. please continue!
5/3/2005 c1
3Krystal Nickle
please continue with this story. it is already very intersting and it is only the first chapter. one girl with three guys! should make a very good adventure! so on with chapter 2 please. thanks

please continue with this story. it is already very intersting and it is only the first chapter. one girl with three guys! should make a very good adventure! so on with chapter 2 please. thanks
5/3/2005 c1
8Sumire Cherise
hey hun! I like it so far! No better way to start than with a long chappie! I'm gonna put you on all my lists, k? so I can keep up with the story! Ciao, bella! ;}

hey hun! I like it so far! No better way to start than with a long chappie! I'm gonna put you on all my lists, k? so I can keep up with the story! Ciao, bella! ;}
5/3/2005 c1 Helyn
OMG! That's funny! CONTINUE!
OMG! That's funny! CONTINUE!
5/3/2005 c1
6twistedFAerieTALes
lmao. great start. cant wait to see what you do w/ur story. update soon! ~Sage

lmao. great start. cant wait to see what you do w/ur story. update soon! ~Sage
5/3/2005 c1 Stupid Yellow Popsicle Stick
"I should have seen it coming, but I never thought Peter had that much evil inside of him. Gee, was I ever wrong about that runt!" HAHAH that's what I think about my little devil child of a brother. ^_^;
"Well... I was going to tell you that my emergency was... I ran out of peanut butter." AHAHAHA! Tristan is SO funny. omg. I feel bad for Sophia being stuck with him. lol.
i can't wait until you tell us more about these three guys, what they look like and all, and more about this Zayden guy (cool name btw)! Continue!
"I should have seen it coming, but I never thought Peter had that much evil inside of him. Gee, was I ever wrong about that runt!" HAHAH that's what I think about my little devil child of a brother. ^_^;
"Well... I was going to tell you that my emergency was... I ran out of peanut butter." AHAHAHA! Tristan is SO funny. omg. I feel bad for Sophia being stuck with him. lol.
i can't wait until you tell us more about these three guys, what they look like and all, and more about this Zayden guy (cool name btw)! Continue!
5/3/2005 c1 B.R.35
Like the idea. Sounds like they are going to go crazy! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep going!
Like the idea. Sounds like they are going to go crazy! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep going!
5/3/2005 c1
6fantasy-heart
Oh it's so good! I really hope you'll update soon. I really like it! I had fun reading that. LOL. Anyway, please update. =D

Oh it's so good! I really hope you'll update soon. I really like it! I had fun reading that. LOL. Anyway, please update. =D
5/3/2005 c1
21tawnyfawn
This was seriously brilliant! Hilarious the whole way throigh, with combinations of all sorts of hunmour! Okay, mainly dark humour, but still. Bloody brilliant! You should definitly continue! As if you can't after writing a beginning that good! =P Well, this is going on my author alert list! So I'll know as soo as you update! =D Which you will! 8threatening* No pressure. =P But, yeah. Great story.

This was seriously brilliant! Hilarious the whole way throigh, with combinations of all sorts of hunmour! Okay, mainly dark humour, but still. Bloody brilliant! You should definitly continue! As if you can't after writing a beginning that good! =P Well, this is going on my author alert list! So I'll know as soo as you update! =D Which you will! 8threatening* No pressure. =P But, yeah. Great story.