for Eclipse of Life4/19/2007 c18 Anonymous
do I smell Chaos in the air? Hm... It'd be interesting to see, but then again it might not end well for the others... Unless that Golden light was released...
do I smell Chaos in the air? Hm... It'd be interesting to see, but then again it might not end well for the others... Unless that Golden light was released...
11/21/2006 c17 CrystalIceDragon07
yay! u updated! Sorry I havent been able to read ur story in awhile! This was an awesome chappy! please update soon!
yay! u updated! Sorry I havent been able to read ur story in awhile! This was an awesome chappy! please update soon!
9/5/2006 c17 DarKk516
This chapter was very well done. I found it quite easy to get into and this is the first one I read. I hope yoiu update it more often than once a year. =)
This chapter was very well done. I found it quite easy to get into and this is the first one I read. I hope yoiu update it more often than once a year. =)
8/29/2005 c2 
57Not Afraid of Bruises
Your story is really taking shape. You have a rare talent for writing myth. Great job and keep writing.
57Not Afraid of BruisesYour story is really taking shape. You have a rare talent for writing myth. Great job and keep writing.
8/29/2005 c1 Not Afraid of Bruises
Good start. This story sounds really intresting, I can't wait to read more.
Good start. This story sounds really intresting, I can't wait to read more.
8/26/2005 c16 8bulletproof.cupid
haha youjust give us questions to think about. i'm confused - might have to read the chapter again =( hmm cloud came to kin and they're finding her. argh need more sleep. right, don't worry about me - i'll get it eventually sorry. take care and thanks for updating. great chapter!
~bubblegum
8bulletproof.cupidhaha youjust give us questions to think about. i'm confused - might have to read the chapter again =( hmm cloud came to kin and they're finding her. argh need more sleep. right, don't worry about me - i'll get it eventually sorry. take care and thanks for updating. great chapter!
~bubblegum
8/26/2005 c16 1CrystalIceDragon07
WOW! I'm your 50th reviewer? Sweet! I feel special! Anyway! I luved this chapter and I cna't wait for more! Your one of my fav authors on fictionpress! So pelase update soon!
1CrystalIceDragon07WOW! I'm your 50th reviewer? Sweet! I feel special! Anyway! I luved this chapter and I cna't wait for more! Your one of my fav authors on fictionpress! So pelase update soon!
8/26/2005 c16 5Holy-Kiske
heh. "you smell much better this time" no offence taken by that... Cloud does have to deal with a lot of things and sometimes he can't take a bath (once he went several months.) but then he does and smells a whole lot better.
5Holy-Kiskeheh. "you smell much better this time" no offence taken by that... Cloud does have to deal with a lot of things and sometimes he can't take a bath (once he went several months.) but then he does and smells a whole lot better.
8/12/2005 c15 8bulletproof.cupid
Yikes, the cuts cause by the winds... ouch. Hmm but I wonder who was watching her... maybe it was Watanabi - seems like him with the golden eyes *shrugs* Gah, Kin's not there to save her. Maybe Cesia! ^^ Meh, good work and update soon hun *waves* L8er days...
8bulletproof.cupidYikes, the cuts cause by the winds... ouch. Hmm but I wonder who was watching her... maybe it was Watanabi - seems like him with the golden eyes *shrugs* Gah, Kin's not there to save her. Maybe Cesia! ^^ Meh, good work and update soon hun *waves* L8er days...
8/3/2005 c15 Cloud
... damn. that would suck. with the wind and blood and the Payain! Howalaven! (vague and poor simpsons refrence) but man... thats gotta be strong ale for watanabi to get drunk so fast...
... damn. that would suck. with the wind and blood and the Payain! Howalaven! (vague and poor simpsons refrence) but man... thats gotta be strong ale for watanabi to get drunk so fast...
8/3/2005 c15 13Shadowhound
I really liked it, and i liked the way drunken Mika talked.
p.s. please read Behemoth so i can get some ideas about what needs to change.
13ShadowhoundI really liked it, and i liked the way drunken Mika talked.
p.s. please read Behemoth so i can get some ideas about what needs to change.