for Dark Chocolate7/10/2006 c1 
4Seashah
Very criptic, a little lusty (maybe that's just my dirty mind playing tricks) but overall I really liked it. Just the way that it moves along. And the way it could have about twenty different meanings to different people. It's awesome.
4SeashahVery criptic, a little lusty (maybe that's just my dirty mind playing tricks) but overall I really liked it. Just the way that it moves along. And the way it could have about twenty different meanings to different people. It's awesome.
5/5/2005 c1 Aleara Conlin
"Something that feels so goodCould not possibly be sin…." I loved this line. And yes, you've posted again! You're a great writer and this is no exception, I loved all the words you used and how you put the feeling across. Keep writing,~Allie
"Something that feels so goodCould not possibly be sin…." I loved this line. And yes, you've posted again! You're a great writer and this is no exception, I loved all the words you used and how you put the feeling across. Keep writing,~Allie
5/5/2005 c1 7swtdreamz101
interesting i have really no idea if u mean chocolate, or something else altogether, nice poem
7swtdreamz101interesting i have really no idea if u mean chocolate, or something else altogether, nice poem