for What Happened Here?8/15/2005 c1 
11les petits bateaux
This is very poignant. The ending was good and it flowed pretty well, far better than what I expected, reading your summary. Again, very well-written. :)
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxThis is very poignant. The ending was good and it flowed pretty well, far better than what I expected, reading your summary. Again, very well-written. :)
~~Trinity
5/10/2005 c1 24alivewithlove13
hey! good job! :) i like this. it's creative. i've never read anything quite like that... it would make an awesome story... about the guy who was in love with a girl then she changes and becomes pretty fake... it would be so kewl! you should write it :) anyway, i really like this :) good job.
24alivewithlove13hey! good job! :) i like this. it's creative. i've never read anything quite like that... it would make an awesome story... about the guy who was in love with a girl then she changes and becomes pretty fake... it would be so kewl! you should write it :) anyway, i really like this :) good job.