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6/11/2005 c1 63lackluster
the last line is clever! i liked it, great job!
5/15/2005 c1 40Deavon Brooks
wow, this is really good. the metaphors are explained! ...and they're explained clearly! wow, this is amazing. this is a very different approach and style of writing, and it's awesome! keep up the good work.
5/6/2005 c1 17incandescent.smiles
I like this... both the way the ideas are expressed and the format. The short lines work really well for this. Good job! The end is a nice touch too... very real. fantastic job.

5/6/2005 c1 81Princess-anna57
Nice poem. Write on!


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