for Glass Heart5/15/2005 c1 
40Deavon Brooks
wow, this is really good. the metaphors are explained! ...and they're explained clearly! wow, this is amazing. this is a very different approach and style of writing, and it's awesome! keep up the good work.
40Deavon Brookswow, this is really good. the metaphors are explained! ...and they're explained clearly! wow, this is amazing. this is a very different approach and style of writing, and it's awesome! keep up the good work.
5/6/2005 c1 17incandescent.smiles
I like this... both the way the ideas are expressed and the format. The short lines work really well for this. Good job! The end is a nice touch too... very real. fantastic job.
~leila*
17incandescent.smilesI like this... both the way the ideas are expressed and the format. The short lines work really well for this. Good job! The end is a nice touch too... very real. fantastic job.
~leila*