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Have You?
5/6/2005
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Maia Vesta
its good, i like it but i think you might have forgoten a d on the end of stare in the third last line
5/6/2005
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lambie
'Have you ever heard the wolf cry to the blue corn moon?'
although your poem is set in like, a dorm unit, it gives me a feeling that it's in a natural environment rather than some building. hehehe.
anyway, i liked this. you go!
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