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5/6/2005 c1 3Maia Vesta
its good, i like it but i think you might have forgoten a d on the end of stare in the third last line
5/6/2005 c1 20lambie
'Have you ever heard the wolf cry to the blue corn moon?'

although your poem is set in like, a dorm unit, it gives me a feeling that it's in a natural environment rather than some building. hehehe.

anyway, i liked this. you go!

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