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7/14/2022 c1 oh and a few
more notelies, from yours blah.

i am obsessed with heaping more of god on myself. i have divined (thru intuition, fine-tuned to perfection, in order to discern His quintessential missives), a new way to go about rehabilitation. it is simply communing with the Lord daily via a massive creative endeavor. (god purifies wherever he goes; you get a lot of his light when you explore the 'unknown creative space.' you get it.)
8/7/2006 c1 3Ramada Paperweight
You reviewed me almost a year ago, so I guess we're both pretty bad a returning the favor. =P

Anyway, I love this. I hate poems that are too intricate and profound that you lose sight of the entire freakin' point of it altogether. This is just right. =) Ambiguous, yet not too confusing. i like it.

psst. great band list. misfits are sex.
2/14/2006 c1 breezy nostrils
wow...beautiful last stanzas. haha...thought i should go see your first poem on fp...come back on! I missed ya girl.
10/2/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
awesome, does not do this justice. how abouth; fucking gorgeous? really, I love the correlation to life and the use of a tunnel just adds uch a nice affect.

~* noelle
5/6/2005 c1 6relletyrots
AWESUM! i loved it. its ambiguous, yet specific, describing something in particular that you have to hunt for. and it has stylistic things like 'yes...' and informalities like "im so damned confused." its hot.

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