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5/24/2005 c1 27kristhegreat
Whoa... I like it! It's very short and sweet, but powerful at the same time, and it's hard to come across good short poems... but you've pulled it off! Awesome! :D ~Kris
5/9/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
intersting how at first the night kinda symbolises the future and how uncertain it is but then you call it "sweet night" kinda showing how you've accepted how you have to move on, thats what i got out of this anyway, i like this, thanks for all the reviews, hope to get your opinion on my other poems sometime too, x weasel within x
5/7/2005 c1 130Relayer
Intriguing, conveys a sense of loneliness to me. Nice work
5/7/2005 c1 indigotear-to lazy to sign in
hum, interesting. keep posting, i missed u!
5/7/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
love the ending

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