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9/24/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
I liked this one...I liked the symbolism you used in the imagery.
5/28/2005 c1 2W3DNESDAY
i liked it.. the storm and the wind and the rivers serve to show the overwhelming force of secrets. i totally get it. i love that you kept it short and concise.
5/8/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
i like this one, i kinda have this image of like leaves being all the little secrets in one massive like wind storm... all with thier own story to tell.. nice poem , thanks for the review, i hope to be able to get your opinion on some of my other poems too, x weasel within x
5/7/2005 c1 shadowofdragons
Hey. I like your poem. Just one thing though. It just doesn't seem "complete." It's like there needs to be more written to make the poem flow or something. I hope you know what I mean. x.x
5/7/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Lovely, I enjoy the "why not?"

A million rivers in the sky, a million thoughts traverse the waters... you have me thinking, my thoughts wandering.
5/7/2005 c1 130Relayer
A nice choice of words but it doesn't say much to me
5/7/2005 c1 indigotear-to lazy to sign in
hum...seems like there should be more. anyway good job keep it up!
5/7/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
beautiful

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