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5/29/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
really a cool poem, i love the line "trip back in time", i cant explain this well but all the words kinda make me picture this like husky voice, a little like umm hannible lector (*spelling) from Silence of the Lambs, it's very vivid and strong x weasel within x
5/13/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
aw... i love the ending~~ so very soothing in many ways^^ Great job!

keep writing!
5/7/2005 c1 130Relayer
Wow! I was grabbed by the line "snip, snip goes the people." Nice descriptions
5/7/2005 c1 indigotear-to lazy to sign in
hey buddy! its awesome to see you back! aww thats cool. mine heart is ripped into a bunch of pieces right now, so mayeb you can help me rebuild it :) awesome job keep postin!
5/7/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
very sweet and ending

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