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9/19/2007 c1 20Twilight Starr
Good beginning. That would be so sad to have your best friend kill themself.

This story has potential.

Looking forward to more.

Good luck with writing and this story.

~Twilight Starr~
5/4/2006 c1 NE0N.lights
This looks interesting, update!
1/5/2006 c1 69mostly water
=| ::wordlessly adds story to faves::
11/29/2005 c1 1Amalthea727
Whoa... again. Your stories are short but deep. Very good work.
8/28/2005 c1 16StarsOverWonderland
this is amazing, for its length, the style, the writing, its short, so it goes quickly, but i think even if it were long it woudl fly by. you ought to write the rest of the story. i'd be curious to know what it was.

ps. i updated my story, as you wished.
7/17/2005 c1 the naked civil servant
i love the rhyming that you don't expect and the and line is just beautiful.
6/9/2005 c1 46MrsRenfro
All I could say is whoa. This poem was really good. It kind of caught me off guard, but i got it.
5/7/2005 c1 8gangster-dolly
Well that was different. Though interesting, nonetheless.

-Emily

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