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2/6/2008 c19 deane mcnamee
wow that was a cool way of stopping that man from following them but now whats going to happen next are they going to get out of town are they going to go and kill lance to put an end to it or what is going to happen i hope u finish this and have a strange ending to go with the title.
2/6/2008 c18 deane mcnamee
wow lance is one evil evil man it doesnt seem like anyone can pick there nose without him knowing. but seeing that they where able to get away from the cops i think they should be able to find a way to get out of town and live from this maybe they should have lance killed.
2/5/2008 c17 deaqne mcnamee
im guessing that zanders gun shot was just a mer flesh wound. im also glad to see mako and zander talking about everything and letting it all out. thats defently helping them out. so is max all good or whats going on with him i know he got 2 bullet wounds but is he not loosing alot of blood or whats going on there
2/5/2008 c16 deane mcnamee
wow this is crazy im still seeing an average of about two grammer mistakes and mispells per chapter but is still awsome i think this should be made into a movie. that sucks that they both got shot i hope she doesnt go into a coma or anything
2/3/2008 c15 negitivedegree
thats a really big reunion its almost like they started where they left off 10 years ago with her in the closet. im also confused here it said they got off on the 3rd floor to go to his apartment but last chapter it said he was on the 4th floor.
2/3/2008 c14 deane mcnamee
wow this is really really good i cant believe i never read this before.
2/3/2008 c13 deane mcnamee
well i hope that it is mako and she remembers everything and forgives him.
2/3/2008 c12 deane mcnamee
i think zander should look further into this and realize how much she hates her family and how much they dont care about her.
2/3/2008 c11 deane mcnamee
wow this sucks for them since she thinks they are there to kill her but really there just there to steal shit i think they should just tell her why they where there when she come back.
2/3/2008 c10 deane mcnamee
i like where this story is going. its really hard to stop reading. im seeing that there are mistyping through out the whole story still just here and there not too bad
2/2/2008 c9 deane mcnamee
wow im seeing how they are more and more related to one another this is really getting good i wish it didnt take me so long to read it so i could finish it all in one night
2/2/2008 c8 deane mcnamee
wow just like any political things there all dirty and greedy for money.
2/2/2008 c7 deane mcnamee
well the story gets thinker. and also i see something there that is very familar and i hope doesnt happen completely. on another side im really liking this so far
2/2/2008 c6 deane mcnamee
its all coming together now im see how everyone knows everyone else. and that really sucks for camille shes not wanted by any of her family the only person who she was liked by was rosetta and they fired her. that sucks
2/2/2008 c5 deane mcnamee
ok now i see why these stories are stagerd the way they are. this one was good i can see the darkness that she feels
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