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6/27/2005 c1 29Les Yeux Minuit
i really love your poems the flow is just so easy to read...and the visualization you put into your poems...just fantastic...i totally love it! you have to write more soon!
6/17/2005 c1 breezy nostrils
I like this one...and the way you set it up. Well done!
6/9/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Wonderful. Love the simplicity in which it's written. Beautiful.
6/6/2005 c1 63lackluster
i really like it, it has a special tone to it. and the rhymes are magnificent too, they just add to the poem!
6/3/2005 c1 41Stifled Scar
This was a great poem. A great example of the cycle of "love". Keep writing!
6/1/2005 c1 1xLilxChikax
nice poem, I like the rhyming pattern and the format. Keep it up!
5/31/2005 c1 49ApplesCM
Great poem. It's nicely written. =) I really enjoyed reading it. Expecially the format. I liked how you did the format.

5/16/2005 c1 169wantedINheaven
It's an endless cycle, is it not?


Good write!
5/11/2005 c1 187THROUGHTHESEEYES
Lovely stage by stage format!
5/11/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
I like it but deviation from the rhyme scheme in the first and last stanzas takes away from the rhythm of the rhyme. The rest is very nice.

P.S In response to what inspired Youth in Asia, I was moved to write because of the death of Terry Schiavo and people's talk of Euthenasia, etc. Thanks for the review!
5/10/2005 c1 14In Search of Sunrise
wow so organized and meaning full..i liked the way you chose your words haha...and the sentences are so evenly balanced! totally different than mine..

oh and thanks for reviewing my poem!: you're right...it does happen with girls too^^ haha...i'll change it
5/10/2005 c1 11jaepoe
i liked the rhyming pattern and the repetition of the first line, the whole concept is really interesting.But your last verse kinda felt different from the rest.
5/10/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
::sigh:: lost love can suck, but you made it have a somewhat possitive spin
5/8/2005 c1 43RedXfire
haha not bad, and thanx for the Review on my poem. Yeah im only 14 but im glad i proved you wrong haah well nice any ways
5/8/2005 c1 8Room Without A Door
Wow. I love it. The short lines work really well to tell the story. I love how throughout the poem it shows different emotions. At the end its almost sad. Really good job!

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