for Please Don't Forget7/4/2005 c1 
6salt n peppr
I very much enjoyed it in a depressing way cause I sort of understand what this person is trying to say. It was a little choppy but I think you have something good here and while I was reading it I felt it tugging on my soul. Thank you for reviewing my poem.
6salt n pepprI very much enjoyed it in a depressing way cause I sort of understand what this person is trying to say. It was a little choppy but I think you have something good here and while I was reading it I felt it tugging on my soul. Thank you for reviewing my poem.
6/30/2005 c1 3SinsUnknown
very beautiful. i kind of took the last few lines as a metaphor for fights, how no matter how bad things get, your love will always be there to bring you back together again, and it's something that's very personal to me, as i've experienced it one too many times with my one true love.
and then going on a technical note, "It’s warmth and smiles reassure me" should instead be, "Its warmth and smiles reassure me." besides that, a really nice poem, :)
3SinsUnknownvery beautiful. i kind of took the last few lines as a metaphor for fights, how no matter how bad things get, your love will always be there to bring you back together again, and it's something that's very personal to me, as i've experienced it one too many times with my one true love.
and then going on a technical note, "It’s warmth and smiles reassure me" should instead be, "Its warmth and smiles reassure me." besides that, a really nice poem, :)
6/29/2005 c1 Faithiny
That's beautiful. I can see that it truly is from the heart as your summary says and I can't understand why so few people have reviewed it. It feels like a song, like it almost has a beat to it. This is really good poetry. Keep writing!
That's beautiful. I can see that it truly is from the heart as your summary says and I can't understand why so few people have reviewed it. It feels like a song, like it almost has a beat to it. This is really good poetry. Keep writing!
5/11/2005 c1 120hypocrite extrodinare
Oh my god... that was awesome! I would use every positive word in my vocabulary to describe it, but that would take you at least 3 years to read this reveiw, so Im just going to worship you and your poetry and wish i were half as good as oyu... and I'm NOT fishing for complements... if I wanted complements, i would go to Shannon and say one bad thing about myself and sit there for days, hearing her go on and on and on about how gorgeous I am... anyway, i wont waste anymore of your time... THIS WAS SUPERB! hehe, and I spelt it right, too...
120hypocrite extrodinareOh my god... that was awesome! I would use every positive word in my vocabulary to describe it, but that would take you at least 3 years to read this reveiw, so Im just going to worship you and your poetry and wish i were half as good as oyu... and I'm NOT fishing for complements... if I wanted complements, i would go to Shannon and say one bad thing about myself and sit there for days, hearing her go on and on and on about how gorgeous I am... anyway, i wont waste anymore of your time... THIS WAS SUPERB! hehe, and I spelt it right, too...