for Sandra12/4/2005 c1 
7Alankria
Lovely. You manage to show his feelings for her wonderfully - the slight aggravation of having to deal with her quirks, yet the overriding love he has for her - without once sounding too authorial. And, as with the others, I noticed no typos or errors, and have no criticisms.
7AlankriaLovely. You manage to show his feelings for her wonderfully - the slight aggravation of having to deal with her quirks, yet the overriding love he has for her - without once sounding too authorial. And, as with the others, I noticed no typos or errors, and have no criticisms.
5/31/2005 c1 21Peregrin Chopkins
Aww... This was so sweet. I love it.
Peace:PEREGRIN
(P.S. I'm glad to see that you're posting more writing here after what seamed to me like a very long haietus).
21Peregrin ChopkinsAww... This was so sweet. I love it.
Peace:PEREGRIN
(P.S. I'm glad to see that you're posting more writing here after what seamed to me like a very long haietus).
5/11/2005 c1 7tickle-me-pretty15
wow you made me cry, he sticks with his mother no matter what.Thanks for the confidence booster to talk to my mother more.
~tickles!`
7tickle-me-pretty15wow you made me cry, he sticks with his mother no matter what.Thanks for the confidence booster to talk to my mother more.
~tickles!`