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12/4/2005 c1 7Alankria
What can I say? Like all your other works, this is superbly well written and highly evocative. This line was particularly good - "Clearly I hadn’t thought this through enough, contrary to what I’d thought. Clearly I was not ready for this. Clearly twelve stories was very high and there was no chance of my survival. None." - Her doubts are tragic, and the reader wonders why she decided to kill herself. A great piece.

Now that I've read all of your works, I have only one more thing to say...

Write more! Anything! You have a talent for writing.
8/3/2005 c1 210Kelpylion
Lucid and disturbing. Food for thought...me wonders why this was written, but much appreciates its excellence as a piece of writing. Write on!
5/11/2005 c1 7tickle-me-pretty15
wow that deep.

~tickles~

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