for Manda Rider 5: The Last Reunion7/11/2005 c11 
6Silver-Dragon5
I really don't like Brock. What a jerk, though it does seem that he was set up like Manda. He didn't know about her note but seemingly he got a note from Manda. I hate notes like that. This person is obviously a coward and quite possibly a girl. Note writing, when little, used to be the trait of most girls.
~Silver
6Silver-Dragon5I really don't like Brock. What a jerk, though it does seem that he was set up like Manda. He didn't know about her note but seemingly he got a note from Manda. I hate notes like that. This person is obviously a coward and quite possibly a girl. Note writing, when little, used to be the trait of most girls.
~Silver
7/11/2005 c10 Silver-Dragon5
Well I'm back again.
So the criminals start to show themselves. I'm a bit disappointed that Manda would fall for a trick like that, but then, when you're caught off guard, these things happen. I'm still loving your story, I just feel I should point out that you have several grammar mistakes in your story. They really don't detract from the story itself, it might be just something you might want to look at one day.
Otherwise, excellent story and I'm going to have to keep reading to find out what happens next!
~Silver
Well I'm back again.
So the criminals start to show themselves. I'm a bit disappointed that Manda would fall for a trick like that, but then, when you're caught off guard, these things happen. I'm still loving your story, I just feel I should point out that you have several grammar mistakes in your story. They really don't detract from the story itself, it might be just something you might want to look at one day.
Otherwise, excellent story and I'm going to have to keep reading to find out what happens next!
~Silver
7/11/2005 c9 Silver-Dragon5
The story is really improving. However, sometimes I get so frustrated with Michael and Manda! They both love each other! It shouldn't be so complicated! (Don't get me wrong- it frustrates me but I wouldn't have it any other way. lol) I'm loving it but it is definitely bed time. I'll have to finish it tomorrow.
~Silver
The story is really improving. However, sometimes I get so frustrated with Michael and Manda! They both love each other! It shouldn't be so complicated! (Don't get me wrong- it frustrates me but I wouldn't have it any other way. lol) I'm loving it but it is definitely bed time. I'll have to finish it tomorrow.
~Silver
7/11/2005 c7 Silver-Dragon5
Love can make you do foolish things and this just seems to be Michael's day. I don't think that Eric did it, I betcha your plot runs deeper than that. I'm thinking group conspiracy? I don't know, I'm just guessing.
Another great chapter. More to read though.
~Silver
Love can make you do foolish things and this just seems to be Michael's day. I don't think that Eric did it, I betcha your plot runs deeper than that. I'm thinking group conspiracy? I don't know, I'm just guessing.
Another great chapter. More to read though.
~Silver
7/11/2005 c6 Silver-Dragon5
They make such a good couple. I'm totally enjoying this story. I love the way you have written Michael and Manda to be, the way they interact. It's wonderful to read.
~Silver
They make such a good couple. I'm totally enjoying this story. I love the way you have written Michael and Manda to be, the way they interact. It's wonderful to read.
~Silver
7/11/2005 c4 Silver-Dragon5
Oh no! That's not good. I hope someone finds him in time. Sorry that this is a short review but I've gotta keep reading. This is so good!
~Silver
Oh no! That's not good. I hope someone finds him in time. Sorry that this is a short review but I've gotta keep reading. This is so good!
~Silver
7/11/2005 c3 Silver-Dragon5
I'd forgotten about Damien visiting Manda's father. But what a twist! That was totally unexpected and the whole him liking Manda thing: is it true? will she make a mistake and fall for him? is this some kind of weird plan of Damien's? I have to know more! Great chapter!
~Silver
I'd forgotten about Damien visiting Manda's father. But what a twist! That was totally unexpected and the whole him liking Manda thing: is it true? will she make a mistake and fall for him? is this some kind of weird plan of Damien's? I have to know more! Great chapter!
~Silver
7/11/2005 c2 Silver-Dragon5
Interesting. Definitely interesting. Its hard to guage what might actually happen next. Almost anything could happen, or absolutely nothing at all. You've set this up well. I'll have to keep reading.
~Silver
Interesting. Definitely interesting. Its hard to guage what might actually happen next. Almost anything could happen, or absolutely nothing at all. You've set this up well. I'll have to keep reading.
~Silver
7/9/2005 c1 Silver-Dragon5
I didn't even realise that you have another story out. You really are a quick writer. I love the way your characters interact and the way that Michael feels about Manda. I can see that this story is going to be just as good and just as interesting as your previous stories. Can't wait!
~Silver
I didn't even realise that you have another story out. You really are a quick writer. I love the way your characters interact and the way that Michael feels about Manda. I can see that this story is going to be just as good and just as interesting as your previous stories. Can't wait!
~Silver
7/3/2005 c20 1Elly Alma
Congratulations on a story well done. You were straightfoward with the end of the case and wrapped it up in a witty comment. I'm looking forward to the next book in this installment.
1Elly AlmaCongratulations on a story well done. You were straightfoward with the end of the case and wrapped it up in a witty comment. I'm looking forward to the next book in this installment.
7/3/2005 c20 Silver Phoenix11
Wow, that girl is behind everything all along, including that incident with Pearl long time ago. Poor Manda. But I'm happy to see she and Michael are getting along well. Ritchie is my other fave.
This was great. I can't wait for MR6!
Wow, that girl is behind everything all along, including that incident with Pearl long time ago. Poor Manda. But I'm happy to see she and Michael are getting along well. Ritchie is my other fave.
This was great. I can't wait for MR6!
7/1/2005 c19 Elly Alma
So. Everything leads up to Jackie. Honestly, even if this book was horribly written I wouldn't have guessed. Me and my great detective skills. Hah. Well anyways, I like the action in this chapter. Dexter's alliance with Jackie was obvious though. I don't think a longtime butler would betray her... I'm supposing Jackie died from that "sickening crack"? And that must be Michael and Moretti with the motor?... Great story. I'm eager for the conclusion.
So. Everything leads up to Jackie. Honestly, even if this book was horribly written I wouldn't have guessed. Me and my great detective skills. Hah. Well anyways, I like the action in this chapter. Dexter's alliance with Jackie was obvious though. I don't think a longtime butler would betray her... I'm supposing Jackie died from that "sickening crack"? And that must be Michael and Moretti with the motor?... Great story. I'm eager for the conclusion.
6/28/2005 c13 caleb
almost...
btw, I know EXACTLY
almost...
btw, I know EXACTLY
6/23/2005 c10 judogirl
Oh, great...Manda, FIGHT WITH WHAT YOU GOT LEFT! Or attempt a shoulder throw after taking out his knees...Remember this: grab, squeeze, twist, and pull the You-Know-What, or better yet, just thrust yourself downward! That's usually your best bet, by the way, if you get bearhugged from behind!
Oh, great...Manda, FIGHT WITH WHAT YOU GOT LEFT! Or attempt a shoulder throw after taking out his knees...Remember this: grab, squeeze, twist, and pull the You-Know-What, or better yet, just thrust yourself downward! That's usually your best bet, by the way, if you get bearhugged from behind!