for Manda Rider 5: The Last Reunion6/16/2005 c15 Silver Phoenix11
This is getting interesting. we learn bits and pieces of rodriguez's history. Manda and Michael are adorable as ever. hehe.. but i like Ritchie, he's got that bad boy edge to him. great chapter!
This is getting interesting. we learn bits and pieces of rodriguez's history. Manda and Michael are adorable as ever. hehe.. but i like Ritchie, he's got that bad boy edge to him. great chapter!
6/15/2005 c14 Brooke ORiley
such fun! and now we must have more! (heh...i'm almost afraid to ask you for more, cuz you'll give me more than i can handle all at one time!)
anyways, well done as usual, yay for manda and michael! we loves them...
such fun! and now we must have more! (heh...i'm almost afraid to ask you for more, cuz you'll give me more than i can handle all at one time!)
anyways, well done as usual, yay for manda and michael! we loves them...
6/15/2005 c13 Brooke ORiley
stupid damien! don't interrupt!
you and your updating again...ridiculous! takes me six weeks to update one lousy chapter of my story, and here you are with two new chapters within one day of me reviewing. ridiculous!
incidentally...i thought of this last night, but forgot to mention it...wouldn't manda and michael have picked up on the fact that the notes weren't in each other's handwriting? or was someone else very good at forgery, and had seen stuff they wrote? just wondered about that...
stupid damien! don't interrupt!
you and your updating again...ridiculous! takes me six weeks to update one lousy chapter of my story, and here you are with two new chapters within one day of me reviewing. ridiculous!
incidentally...i thought of this last night, but forgot to mention it...wouldn't manda and michael have picked up on the fact that the notes weren't in each other's handwriting? or was someone else very good at forgery, and had seen stuff they wrote? just wondered about that...
6/15/2005 c14 
1Elly Alma
Casey just seems like a spoiled girl with a sharp tounge. Could she be guilty?..Hm... But Eric seems a little fishy to me. He's the guilty one or he knows something important.I wonder...Everything is developing well.
I love the relationship between Manda and Michael, but in the last few chapters it seems as if they're over powering the actual plot.
Well that's it for now. Keep writing. I'm loving it.
1Elly AlmaCasey just seems like a spoiled girl with a sharp tounge. Could she be guilty?..Hm... But Eric seems a little fishy to me. He's the guilty one or he knows something important.I wonder...Everything is developing well.
I love the relationship between Manda and Michael, but in the last few chapters it seems as if they're over powering the actual plot.
Well that's it for now. Keep writing. I'm loving it.
6/14/2005 c12 Brooke ORiley
gracious, woman, you're an updating maniac. every time i turn around, you've got another book and a half posted! simply ridiculous. but i'm not arguing.
anyways! still love manda and michael, they're wondrous fun. brock needs to die, and maybe so does damien. or at least he needs to get beat up. ritchie sounds fun, and i hope he's not evil. poor rachel! you have fun killing all these people off, don't you? have they solved any mysteries yet that don't involve murder? don't remember. oh, well...
...trying to remember my cpr class, and i can't...yet it seems as if they shouldn't have been doing cpr. cpr alone won't save a person, it just buys you time till you can get an aed. except the problem wasn't her heart. i'm thinking maybe all they had to do was rescue breathing. but i don't remember. eh...i fail. oh, well.
hope to see some updation again soon! just not too much, too fast. after sunday, i'll be gone till august, so i won't get to read...and then i'll be all busy with college. eh. whatever. i shall read it anyhows!
gracious, woman, you're an updating maniac. every time i turn around, you've got another book and a half posted! simply ridiculous. but i'm not arguing.
anyways! still love manda and michael, they're wondrous fun. brock needs to die, and maybe so does damien. or at least he needs to get beat up. ritchie sounds fun, and i hope he's not evil. poor rachel! you have fun killing all these people off, don't you? have they solved any mysteries yet that don't involve murder? don't remember. oh, well...
...trying to remember my cpr class, and i can't...yet it seems as if they shouldn't have been doing cpr. cpr alone won't save a person, it just buys you time till you can get an aed. except the problem wasn't her heart. i'm thinking maybe all they had to do was rescue breathing. but i don't remember. eh...i fail. oh, well.
hope to see some updation again soon! just not too much, too fast. after sunday, i'll be gone till august, so i won't get to read...and then i'll be all busy with college. eh. whatever. i shall read it anyhows!
6/11/2005 c12 13Faded Soulfire
Poor Manda, I hope she's going to be alright. That was a close call. And Michael- wow, he was really scared, wasn't he? I would have been too. This reunion has been nothing for them but hell on earth. I hope they find stupid Brock, that is if he's the one behind EVERYTHING. Who knows... he could have an accomplice- like Eric. But, anyway, thank you for updating.
Faded Soulfire
13Faded SoulfirePoor Manda, I hope she's going to be alright. That was a close call. And Michael- wow, he was really scared, wasn't he? I would have been too. This reunion has been nothing for them but hell on earth. I hope they find stupid Brock, that is if he's the one behind EVERYTHING. Who knows... he could have an accomplice- like Eric. But, anyway, thank you for updating.
Faded Soulfire
6/8/2005 c11 Faded Soulfire
Eh, I'm not a very good reviewer, SORRY!
I seriously wonder who did it. I mean, Eric seems like the culprit, but I just don't see you revealing him this early. I bet it's someone else. Maybe it's someone that hasn't been introduced yet- who knows? Eric has a grudge against Pat. And Eric just doesn't seem completely innocent. Maybe he hasn't been killing- but I still refuse to trust him until I have to reason to believe him... Uh oh. Is something going on between Tessa and Eric?
Oh crap. Someone is realy setting Manda and Michael up. So, honestly, is Brock behind everything? Maybe he has an accomplice, but I'm just wondering WHY he's the one doing this to Manda! Poor Manda. She CAN'T even swim. Is somebody gonna save her?
Ah. You had to end it like that! Update SON.
Eh, I'm not a very good reviewer, SORRY!
I seriously wonder who did it. I mean, Eric seems like the culprit, but I just don't see you revealing him this early. I bet it's someone else. Maybe it's someone that hasn't been introduced yet- who knows? Eric has a grudge against Pat. And Eric just doesn't seem completely innocent. Maybe he hasn't been killing- but I still refuse to trust him until I have to reason to believe him... Uh oh. Is something going on between Tessa and Eric?
Oh crap. Someone is realy setting Manda and Michael up. So, honestly, is Brock behind everything? Maybe he has an accomplice, but I'm just wondering WHY he's the one doing this to Manda! Poor Manda. She CAN'T even swim. Is somebody gonna save her?
Ah. You had to end it like that! Update SON.
6/8/2005 c11 Silver Phoenix11
Oo I'm disturbed by this chapter. Please don't kill both of them! That means you must update soon. the suspense is killing me!
Oo I'm disturbed by this chapter. Please don't kill both of them! That means you must update soon. the suspense is killing me!
6/5/2005 c2 Faded Soulfire
Last chapter I don't know why I said that Pearl wanted revenge. I meant to say that maybe Jackie was the one who wanted to. Jackie is too nice to be trusted. I mean, why did she really invite Manda? That's what I want to know.
Faded Soulfire
Last chapter I don't know why I said that Pearl wanted revenge. I meant to say that maybe Jackie was the one who wanted to. Jackie is too nice to be trusted. I mean, why did she really invite Manda? That's what I want to know.
Faded Soulfire
6/5/2005 c1 Faded Soulfire
I've been following this story from the beginning, but I admit that I've been a really bad reviewer- and I'm attempting to redeem myself here. I honestly don't know how you keep going and going. You're like a writing machine, and I wish I had that talent.
Anyway, I'm really interested in seeing how Manda and Michael's friendship deepens through the course of this story. They seem really close, and that's really nice to see. All there there is a lot of attraction. It's obvious how they like each other, but I guess they both have their own reasons to not say much. And this family reunion does nothing but worry me, especially from the title. Is Pearl out to seek revenge? I have a feeling that she wants to cause more damage to Manda- and the bad part is that since she has people backing her up... I'm just worried that Manda will be outnumbered. Sure, Michael is there, but I have this bad feeling in the pit of my stomach. Should I be worried?
Faded Soulfire
I've been following this story from the beginning, but I admit that I've been a really bad reviewer- and I'm attempting to redeem myself here. I honestly don't know how you keep going and going. You're like a writing machine, and I wish I had that talent.
Anyway, I'm really interested in seeing how Manda and Michael's friendship deepens through the course of this story. They seem really close, and that's really nice to see. All there there is a lot of attraction. It's obvious how they like each other, but I guess they both have their own reasons to not say much. And this family reunion does nothing but worry me, especially from the title. Is Pearl out to seek revenge? I have a feeling that she wants to cause more damage to Manda- and the bad part is that since she has people backing her up... I'm just worried that Manda will be outnumbered. Sure, Michael is there, but I have this bad feeling in the pit of my stomach. Should I be worried?
Faded Soulfire
6/1/2005 c10 1Elly Alma
0h... Brock. He's so bad... But Manda can take care of herself, yes? Very good ending of a chapter.
I like the part where Manda remembers Rachel. It gives it more drama. I like how Manda regrets not talking to Rachel after graduation, even though Rachel was a darling.
Post the next chapter soon. I'm too excited to know what happens.
1Elly Alma0h... Brock. He's so bad... But Manda can take care of herself, yes? Very good ending of a chapter.
I like the part where Manda remembers Rachel. It gives it more drama. I like how Manda regrets not talking to Rachel after graduation, even though Rachel was a darling.
Post the next chapter soon. I'm too excited to know what happens.
5/27/2005 c8 Silver Phoenix11
Wow, so much has happened. Manda and Michael just couldn't stop fighting, hmm? I guess that's love. it'd be boring if they are happy and fluffy all the time. great chapter!
Wow, so much has happened. Manda and Michael just couldn't stop fighting, hmm? I guess that's love. it'd be boring if they are happy and fluffy all the time. great chapter!
5/27/2005 c8 Elly Alma
Dun, dun, dun... The end of your chapters always kill me. Cliffhangers. Sort of. Well, I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Dun, dun, dun... The end of your chapters always kill me. Cliffhangers. Sort of. Well, I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
5/24/2005 c7 Elly Alma
Well it just keeps on getting more dramatic, doesn't it?... A L0T more tensions between Manda and Michael. They keep on walking away from each other? Is there a pattern? Ahaha, I guess that's how it goes then. Well, I have a short suggestion. Try to characterize your suspects a little more. Not just Ritchie and Damien. There's Tessa, Eric, etc. When you first introduced them, there was individual description. But now they all sort of act as one. Do you get what I'm saying? I may be wrong and I could be missing some hints, and hopefully I'm just that dense. Kidding. The story is going great. Keep it up.
Well it just keeps on getting more dramatic, doesn't it?... A L0T more tensions between Manda and Michael. They keep on walking away from each other? Is there a pattern? Ahaha, I guess that's how it goes then. Well, I have a short suggestion. Try to characterize your suspects a little more. Not just Ritchie and Damien. There's Tessa, Eric, etc. When you first introduced them, there was individual description. But now they all sort of act as one. Do you get what I'm saying? I may be wrong and I could be missing some hints, and hopefully I'm just that dense. Kidding. The story is going great. Keep it up.
5/16/2005 c4 Elly Alma
Killers are just ATTRACTED to Manda and Michael, huh?... Very good... The high school DRAMA! I love it.
Killers are just ATTRACTED to Manda and Michael, huh?... Very good... The high school DRAMA! I love it.