5/10/2005 c1 3Larania Mahera
Awesome beginning. Really hooks a reader into the story. I like that the guy who thinks she can't be a bodyguard got his hand bit. The chapter leaves me wondering what's going to happen, especially concerning the girl's magic.
Awesome beginning. Really hooks a reader into the story. I like that the guy who thinks she can't be a bodyguard got his hand bit. The chapter leaves me wondering what's going to happen, especially concerning the girl's magic.