for Fairyland6/8/2005 c1 
5Ashley Alquine
Thank you for reviewing Forest of Dreams. It's a group effort (five of us are writing it- me, and my four daughters) I am trying to find those present tenses you spotted. Thought I'd gotten them all *laughs* This is a lovely poem. I like imagery of snow and the use of repetition. I also liked the sound imagery. I truly got the impression of snow falling.
5Ashley AlquineThank you for reviewing Forest of Dreams. It's a group effort (five of us are writing it- me, and my four daughters) I am trying to find those present tenses you spotted. Thought I'd gotten them all *laughs* This is a lovely poem. I like imagery of snow and the use of repetition. I also liked the sound imagery. I truly got the impression of snow falling.