for the one7/2/2005 c1 
63lackluster
the ending made me smile! i can just imagine the man in the black coat(great imagery). nice poem!
~tuesday
63lacklusterthe ending made me smile! i can just imagine the man in the black coat(great imagery). nice poem!
~tuesday
5/14/2005 c1 56Silver Nightingale
Loved the images that played in my mind as I was reading your work. Your poem also gave me a whirlwind of emotions despite its length. Nicely done.
56Silver NightingaleLoved the images that played in my mind as I was reading your work. Your poem also gave me a whirlwind of emotions despite its length. Nicely done.