for Darker Shade of Pretty1/19/2007 c1 
124Tipped
I really like your poetry. All of it flows really nicely and is simply honest. I like this one- especially the last few lines- and Mother. They're both really well written and relatable and heartfelt. good job. keep it up.
124TippedI really like your poetry. All of it flows really nicely and is simply honest. I like this one- especially the last few lines- and Mother. They're both really well written and relatable and heartfelt. good job. keep it up.
6/6/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
You have such lingering lines such as "My own darker shade of pretty." what loveliness. You should definitely write more often.
6Nobody-n-ParticularYou have such lingering lines such as "My own darker shade of pretty." what loveliness. You should definitely write more often.
5/11/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Powerful and passionate, I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietPowerful and passionate, I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
5/11/2005 c1 9Morbid Maxwell
This was an excellent piece. You did a wonderful job. The imagery was wonderful and your choice of words...just excellent. I hope to read more poems by you soon Love, great work.
Morbid Maxwell-The Ryuichi love...it burns!
9Morbid MaxwellThis was an excellent piece. You did a wonderful job. The imagery was wonderful and your choice of words...just excellent. I hope to read more poems by you soon Love, great work.
Morbid Maxwell-The Ryuichi love...it burns!