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7/30/2005 c1 13Oogs
Wow...this is really well written, I like this, you use a lot of good imagery throughout it, and you can really get the feeling out of it. Great work! ^^
7/7/2005 c1 1Alzemu
Yup...! it seems that i found you alright! (from p pets)

now about your writing...you have a beautiful way of using similis and metaphor i think..(it's not like i'm a english teacher or anything ;p) but i am SURE that you poem won't help anyone depressed..^_^;;
5/12/2005 c1 37gooey
wow i really love the words you've used. This is a really good poem! Keep it up gooey

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