for emily was born today5/7/2011 c1 
2aesthetic deficiency
this leaves me yearning for everything that is missing. what a fabulous concept, and written so gorgeously. loves.
2aesthetic deficiencythis leaves me yearning for everything that is missing. what a fabulous concept, and written so gorgeously. loves.
5/2/2009 c1 145young and the reckless
this is such a soft un-fulfilling piece that is
just gorgeous enough to be redeemed for its evasiveness.
and your imagery is stunning.
145young and the recklessthis is such a soft un-fulfilling piece that is
just gorgeous enough to be redeemed for its evasiveness.
and your imagery is stunning.
8/10/2005 c1 13evm
Lovely. 'to take a ride and just feel my life/ rising up and away into purple skies' are the best.-::laughs:: I'm ashamed to admit that the only reason I picked this poem to read was because my name is Emily. But having read it...it's brilliant! Awesome awesome job.
13evmLovely. 'to take a ride and just feel my life/ rising up and away into purple skies' are the best.-::laughs:: I'm ashamed to admit that the only reason I picked this poem to read was because my name is Emily. But having read it...it's brilliant! Awesome awesome job.
7/1/2005 c1 63lackluster
"black city and multicolored lights " that painted such a beautiful picture! nice poem!
63lackluster"black city and multicolored lights " that painted such a beautiful picture! nice poem!
6/6/2005 c1 40SilverSpinner
Oh, wow. Very lovely. I adore these lines: "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives / which are screaming to be saved and whispering for redemption." So beautiful.
40SilverSpinnerOh, wow. Very lovely. I adore these lines: "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives / which are screaming to be saved and whispering for redemption." So beautiful.
6/4/2005 c1 30Weeba
Oh. Oh. Simply beautiful story told in such simplistic terms. I love it. Shreds of odd memories mixed in with wonderful reminiscenses, and all of it worded so that your chest aches to be able to write that way. Wonderful.
30WeebaOh. Oh. Simply beautiful story told in such simplistic terms. I love it. Shreds of odd memories mixed in with wonderful reminiscenses, and all of it worded so that your chest aches to be able to write that way. Wonderful.
5/31/2005 c1 Made in U.S.A
so many quotable lines in this. really i think i'm speechless. you're quite the talent so yes again keep writing :D
so many quotable lines in this. really i think i'm speechless. you're quite the talent so yes again keep writing :D
5/19/2005 c1 Wrong Name Tag
It is a little all over the place and confusing... but I don't mind. It's pretty and sounds nice, almost just flows, and with some fantastic images and lines. I really like your style. The one thing I liked, because it seemed original, was the line, "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives". Nice touch, great job.
Jess
It is a little all over the place and confusing... but I don't mind. It's pretty and sounds nice, almost just flows, and with some fantastic images and lines. I really like your style. The one thing I liked, because it seemed original, was the line, "black city and multicolored lights scattered over lives". Nice touch, great job.
Jess
5/12/2005 c1 70this is britt
I like your new name and profile. This made me think a lot of Emily Dickinson. ah, sweet loveliness.
70this is brittI like your new name and profile. This made me think a lot of Emily Dickinson. ah, sweet loveliness.