for Jealousy10/24/2005 c1 
64atalantea
I like it. The piece appealed to me. :D The flow is great and rough around the edges that somehow makes it all the more interesting. :D Good work. :D
64atalanteaI like it. The piece appealed to me. :D The flow is great and rough around the edges that somehow makes it all the more interesting. :D Good work. :D
7/31/2005 c1 1Alexi Lupin
Wow, this is really good!
I can't say I really know the feeling, but I have experienced it. Not as much as depicted here, but enough to have an idea.
1Alexi LupinWow, this is really good!
I can't say I really know the feeling, but I have experienced it. Not as much as depicted here, but enough to have an idea.
6/15/2005 c1 19ShadowNemesis
I feel like that... very true, very real. The emotions are so strong sometimes, and you did a really good job expressing that.
-ShadowNemesis
19ShadowNemesisI feel like that... very true, very real. The emotions are so strong sometimes, and you did a really good job expressing that.
-ShadowNemesis
6/10/2005 c1 25LyLTiArApRiNcEsS
o0o...this was really good. I liked it. So true although I never related, I can totally feel the emotion. Great Job.
25LyLTiArApRiNcEsSo0o...this was really good. I liked it. So true although I never related, I can totally feel the emotion. Great Job.
6/8/2005 c1 Pantheratigris
w00t! This rocks. I can...totally relate...::sigh::
Nice work Pammy-love!
w00t! This rocks. I can...totally relate...::sigh::
Nice work Pammy-love!
5/31/2005 c1 27Hidden Lies
Wow, I can relate to this soo much, he half the reason why I am still up at 3am. Don't you just hate it when the guy you like likes someones else and he rats on to you about her? Man I know I hate that!
Anyway this is a really great poem, going on my fav's and thankyou for the review
Eliza
27Hidden LiesWow, I can relate to this soo much, he half the reason why I am still up at 3am. Don't you just hate it when the guy you like likes someones else and he rats on to you about her? Man I know I hate that!
Anyway this is a really great poem, going on my fav's and thankyou for the review
Eliza
5/25/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
i didnt review this yet? damn im slow! esh! lol. yell at me when i dont review :S trust me, it works then :D nice poem, good topic too!
3Cry Tears of Darknessi didnt review this yet? damn im slow! esh! lol. yell at me when i dont review :S trust me, it works then :D nice poem, good topic too!
5/18/2005 c1 199Saeger
Yeah, I can relate. But its an old feeling for me- it's more fresh in the eys of my friends. The one's I see daily, they feel it... And I can't help but feel guilty...But great job.
199SaegerYeah, I can relate. But its an old feeling for me- it's more fresh in the eys of my friends. The one's I see daily, they feel it... And I can't help but feel guilty...But great job.
5/18/2005 c1 6shorty140
and yet another awsome poem! i can so relate even when my wonderful bestfriend stands next to me with her boyfriend all lovy dovy. keep up the great work
6shorty140and yet another awsome poem! i can so relate even when my wonderful bestfriend stands next to me with her boyfriend all lovy dovy. keep up the great work
5/16/2005 c1 88Icthoid Matro Coselos
wow. good one. I especially liked the last four lines, just put the icing on the cake. (ps... i can relate)
88Icthoid Matro Coseloswow. good one. I especially liked the last four lines, just put the icing on the cake. (ps... i can relate)
5/16/2005 c1 59Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys
This is a really good poem. I know how you feel when it comes to jealousy, i am the most jealous person on da planet, _Anyways great job.R&R my work and i shall return the favour.~devil-apprentice~
59Sacred-Phoenix-NephthysThis is a really good poem. I know how you feel when it comes to jealousy, i am the most jealous person on da planet, _Anyways great job.R&R my work and i shall return the favour.~devil-apprentice~
5/16/2005 c1 10marie alexandria
aw...yeah, i think we've all been through that unrequited love thing and it SUCKS majorly. i really liked this poem, it's really heart felt and i like the tone you used. i especially liked this line ''...About her perfect flaws and I can't fix them''. nice work :) thanks for the review
10marie alexandriaaw...yeah, i think we've all been through that unrequited love thing and it SUCKS majorly. i really liked this poem, it's really heart felt and i like the tone you used. i especially liked this line ''...About her perfect flaws and I can't fix them''. nice work :) thanks for the review
5/15/2005 c1 Eire Rain
Yes, I can deffinetely say I relate to this! It's very well written. I think we've all had a similar problem. Kudos to you for bringing it into words! Keep up the good work and thanks so much for the review!
Yes, I can deffinetely say I relate to this! It's very well written. I think we've all had a similar problem. Kudos to you for bringing it into words! Keep up the good work and thanks so much for the review!
5/14/2005 c1 account not in use
Awesome. I relate very well. I love the desperation, the sadness, and the nager.
Awesome. I relate very well. I love the desperation, the sadness, and the nager.
5/14/2005 c1 13KwazyKandyPie
Oh man, i can relate. I feel this terrible pang of jealousy and envy when i see the person i like being flirted with another girl. the rhythm and rhyming is awesome. ^_^
13KwazyKandyPieOh man, i can relate. I feel this terrible pang of jealousy and envy when i see the person i like being flirted with another girl. the rhythm and rhyming is awesome. ^_^