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9/23/2005 c1 39Kira Deleria
lmao this is the funniest poem i've ever read
5/23/2005 c1 8Nastrond
yes, I guess it did...
5/19/2005 c1 5emof doom
um, the poem's funny...a little odd, but. hehe, i like ur pen name.
5/12/2005 c1 reimeiki
this poem is definetly wacky but makes you think of a summer day that is hot and icky and the duck was and interesting part of the poem, clevery use of rhyming also ^^! overall I like it
5/12/2005 c1 86Cheesy Brussle Sprouts
The author misspelled "I'll," and I think the author meant to use the word "lay" instead of "laid." Other than that, the poem reminds me of Faulkner in that it draws the reader along a hazy path from one point to another. Nice rhyming.
5/12/2005 c1 6scarlet sunrise
haha that was great. "everything went spotty then the duck went potty." pretty unique. keep writing!

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