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1/10/2002 c1 Greg
I'm speechless, and it takes a lot to make me speechless. I'll say more when I get my senses back.
1/27/2001 c1 33A Melancholy Autumn
All I can say is "Wow!" Wow and I hope to read more of your stories because that was execellent...The plot, the ideas, the language, the way it was written...Wow. ~NR
1/27/2001 c1 FT
I found the repetiveness distracting eg: "I ran, I ran, I ran almost forever..." I know what your trying to acheive with this...but it could have been used better to empahsise moments of tension rather than throughout.
1/26/2001 c1 27OllieLemur
Right from the start, Ex "not James", you manage to pull us into the tense atmosphere. Oh! ::clutches at her heart:: the descriptive words! c'est bon! I can feel it, see it... How I envy you."the cessetion of all noise", yes sometimes silence is more eerie than all the noise in the world. You really get ot feel for this poor kid. Even though I've read this long ago, I'm still going "oh, no...oh, don't come up the steps, don't take it!" Ohhh.. "he does everything that i hate. i can hear his little angry voice right there. It's the fatherly feeling of wanting your son to carry on your work taken to teh extreme... only if viktor frankenstien had a son.What a weak woman, though, his mother. Ah no! Don't hurt him!...Oooo! What a wretched man! I want ot hurt him! Oh, yes,let it be over...until: R. C. Carpenter

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