for You5/26/2005 c1 
33charcoal wings
holy fuck, I love it. Especially this part
Cause there'sNothing you can doNothing you can sayYou can't just wash my pain awayI'm trying to move onBut all I hear is you...
It made me cry...cause even though I know it probably has a different meaning then how I am interpreting it I still thought of you-know-who (fucking stupid London should go die and it HAS NO FRIENDS) the entire time. Great job.
33charcoal wingsholy fuck, I love it. Especially this part
Cause there'sNothing you can doNothing you can sayYou can't just wash my pain awayI'm trying to move onBut all I hear is you...
It made me cry...cause even though I know it probably has a different meaning then how I am interpreting it I still thought of you-know-who (fucking stupid London should go die and it HAS NO FRIENDS) the entire time. Great job.
5/14/2005 c1 Wrong Name Tag
I like some of your slanted rhymes, like of "now" and "doubt". Good job.
Peace, hearts and cheers.Jess
I like some of your slanted rhymes, like of "now" and "doubt". Good job.
Peace, hearts and cheers.Jess
5/13/2005 c1 120hypocrite extrodinare
thats so awesome... you should totally sing this and start a band or something kick ass like that...
120hypocrite extrodinarethats so awesome... you should totally sing this and start a band or something kick ass like that...