for The Chosen6/15/2009 c1 Reykjavikblossoms
It seems to "bare bones" to me. And I would like to see what a touch of comedy can do to your story. The plot seems interesting enough.
It seems to "bare bones" to me. And I would like to see what a touch of comedy can do to your story. The plot seems interesting enough.
1/15/2007 c15 
4Mafis
stunning. its a realy catching plot and i seriously want to know what happens. youir an amazing writer, please update
4Mafisstunning. its a realy catching plot and i seriously want to know what happens. youir an amazing writer, please update
2/10/2006 c15 3Mistress of Shadows
OMG! Okay, BEST story EVER! You must seriously submit this to a publisher when it's finished! It's is so amazing! I can't wait to read more! I love teh Christian undercurrent, as well...so amazing to read fantasy that holds to my beliefs. Update, update, update! Please. ^.^
3Mistress of ShadowsOMG! Okay, BEST story EVER! You must seriously submit this to a publisher when it's finished! It's is so amazing! I can't wait to read more! I love teh Christian undercurrent, as well...so amazing to read fantasy that holds to my beliefs. Update, update, update! Please. ^.^
1/25/2006 c15 JBQ
I feel bad for the kids. It must be so confusing to be told that they have to end life, but that its the right thing to do. I hope you update really really doon!
I feel bad for the kids. It must be so confusing to be told that they have to end life, but that its the right thing to do. I hope you update really really doon!
1/25/2006 c15 ebbster
HIS fault? that's a little greedy, if you ask me. taking all the blame. It really doesn't matter what he did, it would have happened soon anyways.
HIS fault? that's a little greedy, if you ask me. taking all the blame. It really doesn't matter what he did, it would have happened soon anyways.
1/22/2006 c14 ebbster
ooh... the plot thickens... sorry I haven't been reading lately. I've been busy, and I'm doing this on my study time. midterms start tuesday. yuck. oh well...
ooh... the plot thickens... sorry I haven't been reading lately. I've been busy, and I'm doing this on my study time. midterms start tuesday. yuck. oh well...
1/21/2006 c1 TwoFriesShort
*Sigh* Amazing.. as usual.. lol. HELLO PETE LOVE!... I'm reviewing and your Ch 1 for that is all that I have time to read since I need to get my butt out the door to my dance. I LOVE IT.. you're amazing! and I MISS YOU! *hugs* Promise to read more later..
Cap'n
*Sigh* Amazing.. as usual.. lol. HELLO PETE LOVE!... I'm reviewing and your Ch 1 for that is all that I have time to read since I need to get my butt out the door to my dance. I LOVE IT.. you're amazing! and I MISS YOU! *hugs* Promise to read more later..
Cap'n
1/12/2006 c6 3argentum-lingua
I just found this story and so far it is really good. I am new to this and just started anyway great job.
3argentum-linguaI just found this story and so far it is really good. I am new to this and just started anyway great job.
1/11/2006 c14 J
WOW! UPDATES! AMAZING! *has heart-attack* So pretty good chapters. I saw a few mistakes where you left out a waord, but it's nothing really. Keep updating!
WOW! UPDATES! AMAZING! *has heart-attack* So pretty good chapters. I saw a few mistakes where you left out a waord, but it's nothing really. Keep updating!
8/24/2005 c8 Courtney
Hey there, it's Courtney :)Are you going to catch up with where you were on quizilla, soon?
Hey there, it's Courtney :)Are you going to catch up with where you were on quizilla, soon?
7/22/2005 c8 ebbster
YAY! another one! All mystery and no information, of course. hehe... what else would I expect from such and enigmatic story?
YAY! another one! All mystery and no information, of course. hehe... what else would I expect from such and enigmatic story?
6/24/2005 c4 candycane-collage
Awesome, and I'm terribly sorry for the late review.
I shall have to read more. Heh heh.
Awesome, and I'm terribly sorry for the late review.
I shall have to read more. Heh heh.
6/10/2005 c1 Organic
Wow, I'm overtaken by your originality. Kids chosen to enter a whole new life with elemental powers. The invisible, and the shadows. You seemed to have put lots of thought into these names. Interesting slang terms, with some Latin routes and some just gibberish. Well, this is just about the most original story I have ever seen.
Wow, I'm overtaken by your originality. Kids chosen to enter a whole new life with elemental powers. The invisible, and the shadows. You seemed to have put lots of thought into these names. Interesting slang terms, with some Latin routes and some just gibberish. Well, this is just about the most original story I have ever seen.
6/10/2005 c7 ebbster
The chosen! the chosen! *dances around in circle while eating more sugar* The chosen are now united! yet they have not met! *gasps* they need to meet! let there be light! *and there was light* Let the chosen meet! *and the chosen met* Muahahahah! I will kill you all with my evilly powers of doom! MUAHAHAHAHAH!
The chosen! the chosen! *dances around in circle while eating more sugar* The chosen are now united! yet they have not met! *gasps* they need to meet! let there be light! *and there was light* Let the chosen meet! *and the chosen met* Muahahahah! I will kill you all with my evilly powers of doom! MUAHAHAHAHAH!
6/10/2005 c6 ebbster
Yay! Mora! everybody loves Mora! *gets robbed by Mora for being to happy and annoying* *stares dejectedly at the floor for a moment* *brightens* That's all right! I just remebered! that was the fake money my brother gave me for my birthday! she stole nothing valuble! *dances off, eating sugar*
Yay! Mora! everybody loves Mora! *gets robbed by Mora for being to happy and annoying* *stares dejectedly at the floor for a moment* *brightens* That's all right! I just remebered! that was the fake money my brother gave me for my birthday! she stole nothing valuble! *dances off, eating sugar*