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12/6/2003 c1 Chambered emotions
Your first poetry attempt? IT'S GREAT! :) :) ! Loved it...I'm glad that a first time poet didn't take the steriotype of rhyming everything...KEEP WRITING!
2/12/2002 c1 kikithe1st
Did something happen to you that made you write this? It is really good. I am sitting in my algebra class right now and I got goosebumps really bad after I read this. It is really good. What happend that made you write this? Is this the way you feel or did it just come to your head? Write me back please and let me know.
5/12/2001 c1 musikluvva
You write what I feel gurl... I looked at your picture you are beautiful... I have certain lonliness/bullying/hate oneself issues so I understand the satisfaction the one silver blade gives keep it up this was class
4/27/2001 c1 10Christine1
Not bad but you could have been better ( like your story "Daddy, when's ...") ...
2/12/2001 c1 NopeNothingNada
*SOB* that's beautiful! and so sad! *trying to clear lump from throat* i'm going to look forward to more from you! =)
2/8/2001 c1 7Monomania
Pretty good for a first poem...
1/29/2001 c1 Lilly
I really enjoy your poem. It, sadly, reminds me of what I used to do. Keep writing!
1/27/2001 c1 girl poisons boy
Aw Bellieboopers, that's so sad.

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