for Silent Confession of a Tortured Heart5/14/2005 c1 
1Formerly
You're right, this is fairly incoherent, and if you don't care, so much the better. But why, then, would you post it on a public website?
I'm really starting to dislike the particular subgenre of teen angst in which you write about something in typically melodramatic fashion without ever bothering to mention what you're writing about.
1FormerlyYou're right, this is fairly incoherent, and if you don't care, so much the better. But why, then, would you post it on a public website?
I'm really starting to dislike the particular subgenre of teen angst in which you write about something in typically melodramatic fashion without ever bothering to mention what you're writing about.
5/14/2005 c1 81daphnegray78
A very powerful piece with a strikingly tragic tone to it. Sometimes it helps to just write about things that are troubling you.
I know that I am just a stranger to you, but if you don't mind, I would like to offer up a piece of advice: Don't look back. As hard as it may be, don't toy with wounds that have not healed yet. I agree that you should not forget the bad times, but hurting yourself over and over again by forcing yourself to recall all of your mistakes... it's not worth it. Focus on life right now. In awhile, you will be able to look back on the past with a lot less pain involved... which not only helps you avoid hurting yourself, but also allows you to really see the situation clearly.
I hope this helps... but, feel free to disregard this. I am actually speaking from experience... but, that dos not necessarily mean I am right. I hope this all turns out okay for you in the end. ^_^
~Daphne~
81daphnegray78A very powerful piece with a strikingly tragic tone to it. Sometimes it helps to just write about things that are troubling you.
I know that I am just a stranger to you, but if you don't mind, I would like to offer up a piece of advice: Don't look back. As hard as it may be, don't toy with wounds that have not healed yet. I agree that you should not forget the bad times, but hurting yourself over and over again by forcing yourself to recall all of your mistakes... it's not worth it. Focus on life right now. In awhile, you will be able to look back on the past with a lot less pain involved... which not only helps you avoid hurting yourself, but also allows you to really see the situation clearly.
I hope this helps... but, feel free to disregard this. I am actually speaking from experience... but, that dos not necessarily mean I am right. I hope this all turns out okay for you in the end. ^_^
~Daphne~