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10/6/2005 c1 The Postscript
Beautiful...how often I have felt this way. Keep writing.
9/21/2005 c1 92Fate Defied
beautiful. im singing it in my head. amazing work, as usual.

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9/3/2005 c1 133Dying Rose
This is really nice and gives me a feeling of sadness, but still with some hope involved. I like it a lot; the imagery and wording is wonderful.
8/18/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
that's a sweet poem! that's a really hopeful peom, i like the repeat of rain come fall down upon me, it's nice a nice effect

*Rain washes away all emotions, leaving only peace*
8/11/2005 c1 Nicholet
That's Sad! But it's prettiful. very prettiful. I like repitition, makeing more . . . sincere. Loverly, I must tell you, very loverly.
7/12/2005 c1 130blackrosestears
That was pretty good. It sounds to me like you want to start over, get off on the right foot. It's good. Keep it up!
6/5/2005 c1 6hockeylover
This is very well written. It flows nicely, i can imagine a tune to it in my head. Lol it's good when poetry can do that. I think that means it flows real nice :) Great job
5/23/2005 c1 83Nails For Your Crucifix
Better as a song, but that's just my opinion. Nice chorus and repitition. Good job.
5/21/2005 c1 Silence the Storm
Excellent work! Rain is such a poem-inspiring force of nature...and you did a fabulous job here! Good repetition, and the wording was excellent. Lyrical and moving. Very well done.
5/14/2005 c1 12myfathersdaughter
It's a good poem. It actually sounds like a song more of a poem because of the repetition. I like the 1st stanza which comes across as a chorus to me. The 2nd stanza and the first line you put newmorning rather thatn new morning. ;D
5/14/2005 c1 6Thadeeus
hello bobbers... heh heh bobbers that sounds funny.. sorry good poem keep writing bobbers. heh heh

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