for honey won't read this12/9/2006 c1 tesa131313
This is a pretty cool poem. But, remember, I is capitalized. Sorry. Had to tell you. But yes the poem is a really cool one.
This is a pretty cool poem. But, remember, I is capitalized. Sorry. Had to tell you. But yes the poem is a really cool one.
8/30/2005 c1 in tesseraction
excellent.
god forbid i say something positive about the last lines at this point.
excellent.
god forbid i say something positive about the last lines at this point.
8/22/2005 c1 
123breakdown in the waiting room
Very despondent and heart-hitting. It's beautiful and lonely. I know- wistful.
-jess
123breakdown in the waiting roomVery despondent and heart-hitting. It's beautiful and lonely. I know- wistful.
-jess
6/19/2005 c1 52AboveTheSalt
chilling. "where was i/your lover boy/when you decided to paint the highway/with yourself" ... absolutely perfect clincher. couldn't have ended it better.
-salt.
52AboveTheSaltchilling. "where was i/your lover boy/when you decided to paint the highway/with yourself" ... absolutely perfect clincher. couldn't have ended it better.
-salt.
6/5/2005 c1 110KonekOniko
oh, wow. sad, but, you've got to be a literary genius. the last two lines are just...amazing. scratch that, EVERYTHING YOU WRITE IS AMAZING.
110KonekOnikooh, wow. sad, but, you've got to be a literary genius. the last two lines are just...amazing. scratch that, EVERYTHING YOU WRITE IS AMAZING.
6/3/2005 c1 14Dirty Wallpaper
I used to be one of those long review whores.
I love the last few lines:"when you decided to paint the highway/with yourself"
Quite perfect really. The disloacting the "with yourself" from the former, gave it that extra oomph, an added complacent sadness. Cool, kudos.
14Dirty WallpaperI used to be one of those long review whores.
I love the last few lines:"when you decided to paint the highway/with yourself"
Quite perfect really. The disloacting the "with yourself" from the former, gave it that extra oomph, an added complacent sadness. Cool, kudos.
5/31/2005 c1 27WiredWords
i love your use of informal language, the way you describe a harsh situation with harsh words, the way you let something ugly and sad be ugly and sad without romanticizing it. Very well written
27WiredWordsi love your use of informal language, the way you describe a harsh situation with harsh words, the way you let something ugly and sad be ugly and sad without romanticizing it. Very well written
5/28/2005 c1 69this is britt
so the inspirations were lost on me- but miss insomnia? my god. you are too brilliant.
69this is brittso the inspirations were lost on me- but miss insomnia? my god. you are too brilliant.
5/23/2005 c1 vionna
aww. sweet.
aww. sweet.
5/20/2005 c1 guiter pickless
i like the way the beginning is odd and the end sounds unintentional, though.
i like the way the beginning is odd and the end sounds unintentional, though.