for Art and Macaroni10/9/2005 c1 
9The Gobbler
Ha! I absolutely love your writing style. I've read your other story also, and I seriously think you should publish both of these. But anyway, this story rocks. I love the way you started, and I especially liked the line about dreams being hard on the pocket. I liked the morals at the end, but I didn't think it was quite as strong as the rest of the story. The last paragraph didn't seem to have much of a conclusion, but just kind of stopped and went into the end of the story. But I really liked this story. You're really talented, and your work is super fun to read.
9The GobblerHa! I absolutely love your writing style. I've read your other story also, and I seriously think you should publish both of these. But anyway, this story rocks. I love the way you started, and I especially liked the line about dreams being hard on the pocket. I liked the morals at the end, but I didn't think it was quite as strong as the rest of the story. The last paragraph didn't seem to have much of a conclusion, but just kind of stopped and went into the end of the story. But I really liked this story. You're really talented, and your work is super fun to read.
9/22/2005 c1 5ChocolateSugar
Wow! I just love your writing style! You should get stories written and I totally love your chapter length! You said that you'd read and review whatever stories people have written if they reviewed your story. Does that still count? Sorry to act like I'm desprate (i am though) , but I just love reviews, and I have a good amount on two of my stories, but in my opinion you can never have enough reviews! And it would just be so great if you woudl review them. I really want to hear what you think because I think that you are an excellent writer that shoudl get published. You're the kind of writer who makes me love reading so much! I know that this is all praise and no suggestions, but I really couldn't find any thing that you needed to work on. I always look and read stories carefully to check and see, but I found nothing. I'm serious. I have about five favorite authors on this story. They are all wonderful and great writers! You're one of them. I'm afraid I can't add you onto my favorite author or favorite story list-I've filled that up a while ago, but if i could i promise that you'd be there. Please continue to writer, update your other story whenever you have time, and one day get soemthing published! and when you get a story published, let me know, because I will be sure to buy it!
5ChocolateSugarWow! I just love your writing style! You should get stories written and I totally love your chapter length! You said that you'd read and review whatever stories people have written if they reviewed your story. Does that still count? Sorry to act like I'm desprate (i am though) , but I just love reviews, and I have a good amount on two of my stories, but in my opinion you can never have enough reviews! And it would just be so great if you woudl review them. I really want to hear what you think because I think that you are an excellent writer that shoudl get published. You're the kind of writer who makes me love reading so much! I know that this is all praise and no suggestions, but I really couldn't find any thing that you needed to work on. I always look and read stories carefully to check and see, but I found nothing. I'm serious. I have about five favorite authors on this story. They are all wonderful and great writers! You're one of them. I'm afraid I can't add you onto my favorite author or favorite story list-I've filled that up a while ago, but if i could i promise that you'd be there. Please continue to writer, update your other story whenever you have time, and one day get soemthing published! and when you get a story published, let me know, because I will be sure to buy it!
9/6/2005 c1 randomwordz
heh, this is about your other story, i thought it was older... but yeah, don't give up on it... even if u don't get that many reviews in the beginning... its good!
heh, this is about your other story, i thought it was older... but yeah, don't give up on it... even if u don't get that many reviews in the beginning... its good!
8/22/2005 c1 Rachel-who-loves-birds
that was a pretty nifty story...sorry, "nifty" is my word of the day. you know, there's a reason dignity rhymes with virginity...oh yeah, so your story was super-awesome...it had a super-distinct styles - one of those i could pick out of a pile as yours... and the morals just kind of ties it up in the typical "insert-your-name-here" way. depressing and all. but the style is different than what you've done before...pretty nifty. lol. i like it a lot! write some more! love, me
that was a pretty nifty story...sorry, "nifty" is my word of the day. you know, there's a reason dignity rhymes with virginity...oh yeah, so your story was super-awesome...it had a super-distinct styles - one of those i could pick out of a pile as yours... and the morals just kind of ties it up in the typical "insert-your-name-here" way. depressing and all. but the style is different than what you've done before...pretty nifty. lol. i like it a lot! write some more! love, me
5/16/2005 c1 T.J. Masters
good stuff; quite funny, although the tongue-in-cheek way of narrating gets irritating, I think it works for you. nice job.
good stuff; quite funny, although the tongue-in-cheek way of narrating gets irritating, I think it works for you. nice job.