
5/15/2005 c1
1Nerdette
AH! That was good...I like Ethan and Matthew's personalities, they seem like typical 'overprotective' brothers. I can't wait to see what the mischevious Gene will get into...Update soon.

AH! That was good...I like Ethan and Matthew's personalities, they seem like typical 'overprotective' brothers. I can't wait to see what the mischevious Gene will get into...Update soon.
5/15/2005 c1
4DeliciousAmbiguity
Aw. You've lost your muse for RT? That sucks, but I'm glad to hear that you won't be just dropping it! Anyways, this start is amazing, I love it. Continue soon!

Aw. You've lost your muse for RT? That sucks, but I'm glad to hear that you won't be just dropping it! Anyways, this start is amazing, I love it. Continue soon!
5/15/2005 c1
8bulletproof.cupid
Yay! awesomeness... I'm liking it already. It's a bit like 'All Along' ((KNE)) but yeah, I'm a sucker for all these romance fics. Hey, don't blame the romantic =P It's great so far, I don't even care if it's clichéd. There were a few typos but right now I don't give a damn about them... like I said, I'm here for the fic =) I like the last sentence there... wow. Kept me thinking if you would update with the whole -Six year later- or continue with her and show how in one year she dated and crap. But what would it be without Ethan ;o) I like the name Gene... it's different, in a good way =D Thanks for the great read. I'm really happy you're back... I mean seriously. I'll look forward to the update of RT in the summer. Can't say that I can't wait... but I'll try to be patient. At least I'm getting updates for this =) Awesome work and take care hun,
~Bubblegum

Yay! awesomeness... I'm liking it already. It's a bit like 'All Along' ((KNE)) but yeah, I'm a sucker for all these romance fics. Hey, don't blame the romantic =P It's great so far, I don't even care if it's clichéd. There were a few typos but right now I don't give a damn about them... like I said, I'm here for the fic =) I like the last sentence there... wow. Kept me thinking if you would update with the whole -Six year later- or continue with her and show how in one year she dated and crap. But what would it be without Ethan ;o) I like the name Gene... it's different, in a good way =D Thanks for the great read. I'm really happy you're back... I mean seriously. I'll look forward to the update of RT in the summer. Can't say that I can't wait... but I'll try to be patient. At least I'm getting updates for this =) Awesome work and take care hun,
~Bubblegum
5/15/2005 c1 alexei04
I really am glad you are back, though I will miss Royal Trepidations. I can't wait until you update on that this summer.I think that this story has a TON of potential...but I have to say that I got confused a lot in the beginning. I think you need to clarify a little better what her feelings are. Right now I think you go on too long trying to switch her feelings around. That said. I really think it is hilarious that her brother and Ethan won't let her date! I can see my brother doing something like that. Actually...he kinda has. He has told me that the guy i was dating was wrong (it didn't actually work out...lol) and then he told me who was worthy enough to date me. LOL!I cannot wait to see where you go with this story. I really love your writing and I have missed it! I AM SOO PSYCHED YOUR BACK! YAY! *does happy dance*
I really am glad you are back, though I will miss Royal Trepidations. I can't wait until you update on that this summer.I think that this story has a TON of potential...but I have to say that I got confused a lot in the beginning. I think you need to clarify a little better what her feelings are. Right now I think you go on too long trying to switch her feelings around. That said. I really think it is hilarious that her brother and Ethan won't let her date! I can see my brother doing something like that. Actually...he kinda has. He has told me that the guy i was dating was wrong (it didn't actually work out...lol) and then he told me who was worthy enough to date me. LOL!I cannot wait to see where you go with this story. I really love your writing and I have missed it! I AM SOO PSYCHED YOUR BACK! YAY! *does happy dance*
5/15/2005 c1
25crazychick88
intresting.. the idea of girl hating guy and vice versa is not new, but i dont doubt that you can weave your own unique twist into it. im so glad that its going to be summer soo.. i realli want to read more of RT.

intresting.. the idea of girl hating guy and vice versa is not new, but i dont doubt that you can weave your own unique twist into it. im so glad that its going to be summer soo.. i realli want to read more of RT.
5/15/2005 c1
4Phoenix Wing
Oh, that was really cute! I'd complain about you not updating RT but I totally know the feeling of losing your muse. Marvelous! I can't wait to read more!

Oh, that was really cute! I'd complain about you not updating RT but I totally know the feeling of losing your muse. Marvelous! I can't wait to read more!
5/15/2005 c1
4Duchess of Serendair
Woo I love it so far...I'm a sucker for these classic type romance stories. Cuz I'm a dork. But it's alright, you just better update soon ^_^

Woo I love it so far...I'm a sucker for these classic type romance stories. Cuz I'm a dork. But it's alright, you just better update soon ^_^
5/15/2005 c1
17scratchfury
wow. This is going to be a huge cliche - oh well, there is a reason they are cliches - they work and have charm. This one certainly has both. Get that next chapter in!

wow. This is going to be a huge cliche - oh well, there is a reason they are cliches - they work and have charm. This one certainly has both. Get that next chapter in!