for A Walk in Central Park
25/15/2005 c1 Wrong Name Tag
Ah that's brilliant. I love how you ended it. And the imagery is fabulous! And I feel like i'm right there.
"And across the path, Tiny houses, Coffee shops Where lovers talked A lover’s talk" was a set of lines that I just couldn't get out of my head, the rhythm and feel of it.
Just... beautiful. It makes me want to go back to New York again.
Wonderful.
Jess
Ah that's brilliant. I love how you ended it. And the imagery is fabulous! And I feel like i'm right there.
"And across the path, Tiny houses, Coffee shops Where lovers talked A lover’s talk" was a set of lines that I just couldn't get out of my head, the rhythm and feel of it.
Just... beautiful. It makes me want to go back to New York again.
Wonderful.
Jess