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10/2/2005 c1 1chibicherrychan
Ok, fantasy never really was my thing, but I figured: there's a first time for everything. I must say your writing is amazing. Such a good quality of English, it truly is impressive. From having read "Pressure" before, I must admit I would not quite have expected you to have such a style in story writing. It is an intriguing start. Kalan's best efforts lead to his kingdom's doom after all... Well, humans will be humans. Now, why hasn't this piece been reviewed before? It's good and has a plot; you might have intimidated people or something... You refered to this as the backhistory of your story, so good luck with the actual story. It has good potential.

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