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8/24/2004 c1 30Weeba
I like the little hints at the actual thoughts and feelings of Despair. After all, you can't personify something without humanizing it a bit, now can you?
I also love the metaphors, and the feelings that this poem evokes. Just great job all-round. ttyl!
1/27/2001 c1 17kawaii-kiwi
VERY GOOD

I WROTE APOEM CALLED ESPAIR, TOO. IT IS SHORTER, BUT THEY ARE VERY SIMILAR, PERHAPS YOU'D ENJOY READING IT...

ANYHOW, THAT WAS VERY GOOD **SLAPS HERSELF FOR REPEATING**

THE SYMBOLISM, YES, BUT I LIKE DEPAIR ;)

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