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8/19/2006 c1 total vintage
Wow, that is so good. I love the way the words just flow, brilliant.
9/15/2005 c1 5RedHairedWriter
so many listen but don't hear... A beautiful tragic, thought through poem... If anyone wants war after that... well... brilliant
7/24/2005 c1 Manju
woah. i love the first verse most. u should try more poetry. this one's good enough. if u do need help, don't hesitate to ask. oh and pls check out some of my work. i'd really appreciate it.
6/19/2005 c1 SonheDeusa
I really liked the way you put this together. You brought forth the imagery of a kid experiencing the pain of fighting parents in each stanza (at least as I read it). Keep writing!
5/17/2005 c1 12eighteen hundred
It was alright, might've been more effective if you'd had more, but thats just my opinion.
5/17/2005 c1 74laughter at the funeral
the repetition format really works for this one...it somehow evokes a somewhat of social awareness air to me...good job here...oh and pls..if you have the time...pls do review some of my poem..thanks...

truly yours...
5/17/2005 c1 Eleventh-Lullaby

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