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12/27/2012 c1 Guest
That was really nice
11/8/2011 c1 1DofD
Oh. My. God... The regret and blame that poo girl would live with for the rest of her life. I wouldn't be able to handle it.

This is so beautifully written. You have a way of pulling at emotions.
9/23/2011 c1 crazilyawesome
Was going through my favourites when I came across this, and even though it's my 2nd time reading it, it's still just as poignant and just so incredibly sad ):

Your writing is amazing.
7/20/2011 c1 5Marjulie
I can't, no I don't want to imagine what happened to the guy, cause if I did, I'll be in the state of depression just thinking about it.
12/28/2010 c1 witeaya
did he jump?

if he did it will be all the more heart breaking.
10/15/2010 c1 1x Farii
This was amazing. Honestly, beautiful (:
10/10/2009 c1 112SmashedIce.X
This is great, but so sad! Amazingly well written. :D
8/11/2009 c1 2MidnightblueAurora
damn! wow...this is good...really good...really really...okay maybe excellent is the word? yea, excellent is a good word. the diction was, wow, flawless...the descriptions, the event on which the story is built...it's gripping, heart-wrenching and just...excellent:) it's really sad though, but it's a real story, as in it shows reality, 'cause not every story can have a happy ending...i really love it:)
8/11/2009 c1 Interesting Story
Sad!
8/6/2009 c1 1All That Spunk
This was very very amazing. I have to admit, after reading this, I was damn near tears. You offered just the right amount of everything in this, and I really do dislike one-shots, but this has convinced me otherwise. Seriously, great job. I'm looking forward to reading your other stories.
7/16/2009 c1 10CassandraStacy
When the bridge was introduced in this story, I knew it couldn't end up well! This story was incredibly sad but it was also incredibly well-written. I loved it. I think the destroyed picture at the end was wonderful symbolism.

Cassandra
6/6/2009 c1 GinzzzRoxxx
Thank you.
10/18/2008 c1 2dragonflydreamer
Your narration style is very lovely. It uses beutiful descriptions, but not in excess, so it was still easy to follow.

I liked your metaphor at the end, as well. It was very powerful.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. It was a refreshing read after the run-of-the-mill romances you generally find on this site.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
7/28/2007 c1 10blue.eyes.can.be.deceiving
That was extremely sad, and my eyes are all puffy. You have such a great talent, you are such a great writer, all in all, your stories have painted vivid pictures in my mind, vivid, like vivid vivid. haha, it almost makes me feel like i should run to my old bestfriend, who I spent most of my childhood with until we became teens and I moved away, and hug him and tell him how much he meant to me, how vital it was that I knew him when I was little. This piece(if i should even call it that) has touched my heart. so much.!

ashlyn
5/25/2007 c1 48daughteroftherain
Oh...

that was tragic, the ending...

i feel like crying
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