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11/17/2006 c1 41butterflibri
Wow... that's all I can say... just, wow... It's awesome and catchy... I love way it sounds...

ButterfliBri
12/27/2005 c1 28Annaece's Forsaken Corpse
Another GREAT poem and there is no way I'm not putting you on my faves list - you rock!
7/5/2005 c1 63lackluster
great job on this! it's a great poem!

yes i know, pathetic review. i don't know what to say...~tuesday
6/14/2005 c1 155Shadowed Mind
this is really good, despite what you said at the beginning. all the poems i've read of yours are just amazing, and this is no exception. you express what is always on my mind. never give up hope. all my love, shadowed mind
6/7/2005 c1 NumblesTheAuthor
i like this, even if the beginning reminds me of the tunnel in willy wonka...
6/4/2005 c1 44RikoRishodeathangeloflight
Wow, that was very interesting. I really liked it!
6/3/2005 c1 49Neaera
this is beautiful. you make the words flow so well...and you make it seem so easy! keep it up!
6/2/2005 c1 4Supergirlatomic5
This is so good, it's the best poem i've ever seen, you should definatly write more poems because your really good.
6/1/2005 c1 157darkmistresslae
This was really good. I especially liked the line "Paranoia killed and now I'm alone". For some reason that just stands out as being wonderful. I also really liked the ending. It summed things up and at the same time made it sort of loose. Nice job.
6/1/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Nice flow and rhyming. Great job.
6/1/2005 c1 Winter Reflections
i used to be like this, great poem btw. thanks for reviewing mine. ever since i have gotten out of my depression and gotten happy again i have been kindof giving up on reading angst just incase it makes me hurt again. this is good though. i love it.
5/31/2005 c1 125Lady Hoshi
I feel the same way. The feeling of crashing. The wanting to give up and the loneliness are very real.
5/25/2005 c1 270queenvixta
I really like this! Very well written, very individual piece. Good job! QueenVixta
5/24/2005 c1 3eldoronian
Wow awesome poem! I especially liked the first half, because of the vivid descrition. If this is you being not good, I can't wait to read one of your good poems XD

-Rachel
5/23/2005 c1 15Starflamer
Omg! It's so nice! And you say mine's nice...I'm interested in Harry Potter too...maybe we can write something together?
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